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are dirty little secret cahp 2
hi hi i think i like first person so i might swicth back and forth between naruto and sasuke point of veiw but this is naruto's some warnings there are somw swear words in english in this chapter i think thats it







“Now seat back down.” Iruka stated while pointing back towards the class room. The class room was silent when we entered and took are seats. When Iruka sensei started talking you could here the whispers and see the pointing finger from the other students behind sensei’s back.

“Nice job Dobe.” I heard Sasuke whispered right next to my ear i could feel the breath on my ear lob and shivered from it.

“Teme” Naruto shot back turning his head slightly so he could see the raven haired teen out of the corner of his eye. Sasuke sent him a glare that could melt ice but Naruto was not intimidated easily. ‘What a teme it's his fault we have detention for a week I didn’t do any thing to him’ Naruto thought as he tried to pay attention to the lecture.

The bell rang and he went off to his hiding space for lunch Sasuke followed him quietly. Naruto sat on top of the school eating a sandwich thinking of ways to get out of the detention. ‘Maybe Iruka sensei will let me do them next week so I don’t have to see the teme.’

“Usuratonkachi” I stiffened slightly at the voice I new Sasuke was attached to. ’I don’t want to fight not know.’

“What do you want Sasuke?” Turning around I see that Sasuke doesn’t look mad not like I thought he would be the perfect jerk probably has never had a detention in his life.

“I want you to go tell sensei that it was you fault dobe.” His hands were in his pocket and he was not looking at me why?

“Why the hell would I do that Sasuke it was you damn fault.”

“Naruto I don’t care whose fault it is I can’t have a detention” he was slowly walking up to me as he spoke. “Naruto… Please.”

‘Wait did he just say my name s**t am I dreaming wake up.’ “To damn bad Sasuke you started it you live with it.” There was a sudden pain in my back as Sasuke pushes me up against the building. ‘What the hell is his problem', I try to get free but his grip on my arms is tight.

“Naruto…” are eyes lock and for a moment I am lost in those eyes the color of the night sky he shifts his gaze and I realize how close we are.


“…”

“Please.” He leans in close I feel my checks redden and my body feels like it is on fire all I have to do is lean forward and close the gap.

“Uchiha.”

Sasuke pulls away to see Gaara looking more pissed then he normally did.

“Gaara I was just leaving.” Sasuke shoves me hard into the wall before glaring at Gaara and walking to the ladder






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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 09, 2007 @ 05:20pm
AWESOME don't leave me hanging post more~! ^^ it's amazing you're very good at writing btw i think i might start a fanfic.. but i'm not that good at writing crying


commentCommented on: Fri Feb 15, 2008 @ 12:26pm
where's chapter 3... crying



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