ok, yea...you know what i also hate? that I draw a picture, it stinks and ppl get all 'oh it's so great! could you draw me one' and stuff...it's annoying! it stinks! I hate it! and then they go and ignore the stuff i'm proud of! yea, so what if they are demon?! I LIKE IT!!! and you like that peice of crap that i drew , and not the wonderfull demon mercenary...what a comment to your intelligence!
ok, yea, sry to anyone who reads this...and sry for wasting you time...so here's a random poem I guess...let me dig out my notebook real quick...
*5 minutes later* HERE it is! XD
ahha! here's one thats not dark and gloomy!...well not much...
mirror
I see a glimmer,
a fancyfull shimmer.
I go and see,
not sure what I'll find.
And there is a window,
I see a sranger walk up.
I see her stop and stare.
I'm wondering who this fool is.
And wonder why she's sraring,
this idiot halfwit.
I stare andnotice the brusis and scares,
I notice the pain in her eyes.
and I relise it's not a window.
It's a mirror.
I'm looking at myself
-sakuka
I see a glimmer,
a fancyfull shimmer.
I go and see,
not sure what I'll find.
And there is a window,
I see a sranger walk up.
I see her stop and stare.
I'm wondering who this fool is.
And wonder why she's sraring,
this idiot halfwit.
I stare andnotice the brusis and scares,
I notice the pain in her eyes.
and I relise it's not a window.
It's a mirror.
I'm looking at myself
-sakuka
Ok, i've done the first part before...lol and promptly got a haircut! XD
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I do like the poem, though. I think my favorite parts are the first two lines, cause those go so well together with the rhyme and everything and I also love how you connect the narrator through a "window" into the mirror. I liked it! Sorry I didn't realize you had a lot of poetry in your journal, but i liked it a lot! XD