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READ IT!!^^
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HARD TRAINING
CHAPER THREE
HARD TRAINING


I awakened by a sharp pain in my side, and a goofy looking man staring down at me. I was no longer in a dense forest, sitting on a branch eating the finest of wolf meat. I remembered the previous day’s events. “Oh… I’m HERE.” I muttered, and sat up.
“Ah! You’re awake!”
“No really?” I asked sarcastically
“Good, now swim across this river”
I stared at him, ‘What the heck is wrong with this guy?’ I thought, ‘I can’t swim across that!’
“Yea I’m not doing that.” I said standing up.
“Hm?” He said, now that I was standing, and he was squatting, we were at eye level.
“I can’t do that. I can’t swim across. I can’t do it!” My hands tightened into loose fists.
In one swift motion he stood up pulled out his long sword and thrust it down over me. It stopped centimeters from my nose.
“Sure you will.” He still had that goofy grin, so I wasn’t too afraid, it didn’t stop me from flinching. He sheathed his sword and shoved me toward the river. I tried to protest but it was too late. I was tossed into the river.
After struggling helplessly for air and wearing myself out for a while I started to give up. The way I saw it, if he didn’t kill me along with my parents, why would he let me die now? My head bobbed up and down in the rushing water as the life was draining out of me. I caught a glimpse of my sensai, squatting further up the bank. He looked sad. SAD? ‘He doesn’t look like he’s going to save me at all! It looks like he’s already figured me dead!’ Life surged within me again and I began struggling again. The next glimpse I caught of him, comforting as it may seem it should be, wasn’t comforting in the least. Back to his old grin again. ‘Death by river? Doesn’t sound good. Death by some idiot that pushed me in the river? Sounds worse.’ I made my legs and arms move in a more rhythmic pattern and started to put more force with each stroke, and after making all my limbs aim in the same direction, I made it to a rock.



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Reigen Sutoikku-sama
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 28, 2007 @ 09:27pm
assuming anyone reads my journal..... stare


if two people comment, i will continue my story on gaia, if not ill keep it all to my self and the human race will be enslaved to- oh ahem, if not ill continue to make my story on WORD and not gaia.... no skin off my bones^^


commentCommented on: Fri Nov 02, 2007 @ 11:56pm
continue continue continue continue continue ect ect blah blah blah



ToasterKii
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 03, 2007 @ 12:04am
maybe you didnt hear but i need 2 *sigh* and no u cant post twice penguin >.< *still calling you penguin*


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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 16, 2007 @ 02:02am
I might read this if it had better structure... the dialogue lacks feeling... the character discription... a goofy man... goofy how? along with spelling and punctation errors... if you need a beta, I'd be happy to oblige.



Sissy Slut Winter
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 16, 2007 @ 06:20pm
if i need a beta??

No no im going to keep the bad structure and terrible grammar. It's not like i want to publish it. Most of the time i dont even reread it after im finished typing. Im also writing like three other bookes READING like 4 and my parents are killing be about grades so its not like i have an hour to devote to this story. xd Kill me for it, i dont care^.^


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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 23, 2007 @ 02:28am
I am your second (for you to continue) Comment!!! GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO!!! domokun



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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 23, 2007 @ 02:30am
I am your second (for you to continue) Comment!!! GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO!!! domokun


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