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Akuma's thoughts This journal will ony talk about what I am thinking and what I am feeling.


Akuma254
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here i am after halloween....i didn't do anything that day....now i'm a vamp, which really sucks....anyway, i'm coming up with poems, so comment.

Such despair and desolation
In a music's solemn time,
Only increases dark depression
Farther and farther down the line.

Create such pain and seperation
In the present and the past.
Stir up you pain and desolation;
You shall be broken at last.

I have seen the deadly raven
Such as the black fire before
It was close, right next to me
Right behind my bedroom door

Soon I know myself was broken,
My heart, my mind, they sway in time.
As I wander along the road,
Farther, farther down the line





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Akuma254
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comment Commented on: Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 12:08am
I opened it, and there it was
Black feather, beak, and eyes so small.
When I talked to it, I felt
My mind was building four grey walls.

Soon I know myself was broken;
My heart, my mind, they sway in time
As I wander along the road
Farther, farther down the line....

that poem i call Farther, Farther Down the Line. I got the idea from reading Edgar Allen Poe's 'The Raven'


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