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13 Burning Roses
Boo, Rawr...I scare you... Leave comments ^-^
My Little Poem
Tell me anything to help
And tell me what you think
Please


As the Rose petals turn to Ash
And the Rain keeps Falling
The World falls Apart

While Darkness is taking Over
And the Rain keeps Falling
A single Flame stays Alight

Sadly the Light is Fading
And the Rain keeps Falling
They Fear it will Fail

Soon I take a deep Breath
And the Rain keeps Falling
As I fall to the Floor, it's the way I Wanted






User Comments: [4]
Xehan55
Community Member





Mon Dec 31, 2007 @ 02:18am


Well, I found that the 4th paragraph and first line had 'Breath' misspelled...Jus sayin' ^-^...I like it tho


7 Radiant Roses
Community Member





Wed Jan 02, 2008 @ 12:57am


lol
thanks
my spelling isn't the best... ^-^'


Xehan55
Community Member





Fri Jan 04, 2008 @ 10:02pm


Ur welcome ^-^...Glad I could help


Too Horny To Think
Community Member





Wed Jun 25, 2008 @ 02:45pm


Hmmmm? I think I know what it means, but I am no sure!!! I feel retarted!!!!!
heart Blood


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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