ok... so i feel bad i havent added anything, and i write like a million stories so why not post another one? This is the first book in a trilogy i've been writing... its nothing special. I can't give you all of it be cause i don't have it all on this comp. ^^
The Origin of the Rain Warrior Nathan
I or some other being, I don’t know, is standing… standing in the rain.
What is the rain supposed to symbolize? Sadness? NO! It symbolizes great power. I or this being that I am trapped in is the master of water. This power came not too long ago, not long at all. Just yesterday but I, I mean we’re, already wanted in four states. FOUR STATES!!! Had I done so many bad things? In just one day?!?! I turned around and gazed upon the destroyed, flooded town. Had I done this? If I had I don’t remember. How? How could I of done this? I turned back around gazing at the ocean in front of me. I didn’t know what ocean it was or what city I had just destroyed, but it didn’t matter. I suddenly changed, without having a care in the world I jumped. About ten times farther a normal man could jump, I dived into the ocean. I could breathe. I could breathe under water! “That’s so cool!!!!!! Wait a minute. What’s going on?” After going about twenty feet deep I started speeding through the water, horizontally of course, at, at least 40, no 50, no 60 miles per hour and still rising! I charged through the water as if I were flying. Undisturbed by the pressure of the water, I remembered, “What! I’m a criminal!! I must be stopped before I destroy something else!!” I blacked out.
“Huh? What happened?” Nathan sat up on the hotel bed. He looked to the left and saw a window; it was small, as most hotel windows are and the sun told him that it was midday. He looked to the right and saw a door surrounded by a cream colored wall, more importantly the way out. He didn’t know why but he felt as though he should leave, but tired as he was he decided to rest for a bit longer. Hours later he awoke once more. He sat up and looked around. It was dark, had to be at least 3:00am. Nathan blinked, yawned, and stood up, gazing at the room once more. His clothes were a little damp, and his legs were a bit shaky, but he made it to the door.
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