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A young woman named faella attends a grand ball in the home of the countess, young, vibrant, and single the girl mixes around making small talk as is proper for a young lady. When, from across the way she spots an elgantly dressed, young gentlemen smileing at her. he gestures to her and without thinking she walkes straight to him. he continues to smile without showing his teeth and nods in the direction of the empty, dimly-lit courtyard. looking for love and in hopes that this mysterious young suiter may posses the key to her heart, she follows. he leads her to a secluded bench, and produces a small skull-shaped hairpin and speaking for the first time whispers "for you my sweet, a symbol of forever" a very odd thing to say, but she was absolutely under his spell. he took her face between his hands and began pulling her face toward him as if to kiss her. Then smiling hugely, he exposed two large, canine-like fangs. Faella tried to pull away, but he was too strong. He pulled her in and bit the side of her neck, just under her jaw.
~THE END~
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I hope you like it, do not steal my story! please vote fairly, this is my first submission. comments are appreciated, thank you.






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Alex_freak748
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 11:14pm
that was awsum!!!! i luved it!!!! its like Edward gone bad. if he looked like Edward, i wouldve followed him. hehe. lol
really great, i loved it. really.


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 11:30pm
so the truth is always good...
you see, i do like it, but i think it needs more intruige, more spice. like....the vamp is a young courtier known for his familiarity with the women of the court, or he was forbidden to her because of his status, or something that makes them more star-crossed than the vamp-human thing.
I do like it though, it goes with your avi ^^
Cozy



Amaya_Ookami
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taylor123tg
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 22, 2008 @ 10:17pm
that story was really intreasting. did u make it up your self??? heart biggrin heart


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