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Poetry and random things I have many many poems and never enough space so this will be a good place for it.. feel free to comment on them i always love people readin my poems.


Yin_kitala
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Your eyes
Ok, so this one I have to give some backround to. This one was written for my little sister and my little brother. Whom I have not seen in many years. The poem Memories was written for my little sister. So keep that in mind as you read it
Your eyes shine bright
Those beautiful emerald eyes
Smiling you faced the world
Just as I did then

You are my fondest memories
Of the darkest path called childhood
The day you were born I promised you
That you wouldn't ever have to worry

I knew then our paths would part
So I gave you a piece of my heart
A happy little child you were
Strong willed as I was as well

I see your faces every day
I hear your happy laughs
And this my sister and brother shows
I kept my promise

My love travels many miles
Though my heart is no longer whole
It's spread across the U.S.
An follows you both wherever you go.


An btw.. I love to hear how people like or don't like my poetry.. I see lots of people read it.. yet nobody takes the few seconds it would take to tell me what they think.. Please try to take that few seconds once in awhile. Thanks much





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iCupcakeSurprise
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comment Commented on: Mon Jan 14, 2008 @ 06:22am
It was cute. ^^ I really like your poems, they're so emotional and pretty. They make you stop and think for a minute. Keep up the awesomnessly good work!
3nodding


comment Commented on: Sun Jan 20, 2008 @ 02:31am
*hugs!*
ur heart is so big... it covers all smile heart <-- like 1,000,000,000,000 of tho's...
(1 trillion i think... maybe more... we will see :hugs!: )



Maddness91
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