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The Phases of my Life
This is a place I'm going to be putting up most of my poems, no one has to read them but if you do I would really like to know what you think of them. If you could please leave a comment or message me about it I would be thankful.
Pains (poem)
all this pain.....
i still feel it...
building inside of me...
pain....
overwelming pain
things rip through my mind
and i feel pain...
they move so fast
and the ones that linger hurt the most...
they cause the most pain...
pain
so much pain
doubt spreads in my mind.
i move it away
yet its still there
at the back of my mind...
ready to come back at any moment.
pain
still so much pain...
all over
when will it go away?






User Comments: [9]
jinjin112
Community Member





Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 07:08am


omg.... that reminds me of shawn... i kno u may hate 2 hear it but at this point in time it does... but ... i kno where u coming from with this one... it's deep... crying
i hope thing get better with your pain


Major Squirrels
Community Member





Wed Jan 30, 2008 @ 04:28am


Are these poems how you really feal? (just asking, you don't have to answer it)


Purple Kyouya Otori
Community Member





Wed Mar 05, 2008 @ 04:17am


hey,..............when will it be ok???????????? gonk crying redface heart


Purple Kyouya Otori
Community Member





Mon Mar 24, 2008 @ 04:52am


gonk its so deep... crying domokun eek ninja im sorry u feel that


jinjin112
Community Member





Sun May 11, 2008 @ 05:54am


yea... well i hope that time has passed. and hopefully won't come again
but i kinda in need of gold so i commenting again
*hug* don't feel used cause i do this ppl i care about.... and so far u r the 1st biggrin


Phobon
Community Member





Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 09:15am


I have read your journal postings (poems). You have a theme of lost love, and the pain of loneliness. These are universal issues, and can speak to someone of any age. They may even mean something else to you later in life, so I hope you save them.


Abby The Odd
Community Member





Mon Sep 29, 2008 @ 12:10am


*snaps fingers*

We should do a poem together...


lovley girl45
Community Member





Wed Oct 29, 2008 @ 04:58am


*sniff*
Rainy are these poems true?
i feel for you Rainy
GUESS WHAT today at target i saw a domo ^.^


Midget_Shinigami
Community Member





Sat Apr 18, 2009 @ 06:17am


Friends always help with pain. You have all of us to help you get over your pain. ^^


User Comments: [9]
 
 
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