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Patrick sat on the love-seat of his house and stared at his 15 year old bother , Bryan , and girlfriend Breshae , make-out on the couch . He always hated that he had to stay home with Bryan , he never did anything but make-out with Breshae on their couch and his mom made him stay home to see this ? He sighed and continued to watch Bryan and Breshae suck face , he watched Bryan's hands travel down her spine and Patrick began to admire her curves and how perfectly they shapped down to her plumped butt . Just looking made his heart skip a beat but he couldnt take his eyes off of her, her light carmel complexion not to vanilla but not peanut butter just right for the eye . He stared at her curly hair that fell right down to her shoulders,admired her perfectly manicured fingernails that continuosly touched Bryan's face . Patrick couldnt help but want to touch her and put his hands around her perfect little waist , and have her give him that seductive look that she gives Bryan everytime he holds her . He sighed at the thought of not having her and opened his SideKick LX.



" Bryan , I have to go . " Breshae whispered , pulling away from him and wiping the lipgloss from his lips . He groaned not wanting her to leave , Patrick smiled at her voice , how little it was to be her age . Breshae Gomez was a 16 year old junior in Highschool , she was a majorette and had a nack for dancing , every guy wanted Breshae, how Bryan got her was beside Patrick he could never figure it out , along with most of the school .



Patrick had always liked Breshae , not her body , but her beautiful personality , she was nice to everyone , and always giving to someone . Patrick now admired her figure and it was werid to him that he was feeling these things about his little brother's girlfriend , but he couldnt help his fansties about her . She was stuck to him like a tattoo and he couldnt get it off. Breshae , to Patrick, had the whole package any guy could ever want , she had the hips , tiny waist , flat stomach , plumb round not to big- not to small a** , innocent face , and seductive looks . To Patrick , she could do no wrong . She was a perfect 9 , why he said 9 instead of 10 ? Because nobody wants a 10 then she would be to perfect and cocky for Patrick's liking , and she wasnt cocky at all . She had flawless looks but never showed them off completely . She new how to get attention just by showing off alittle , and thats what Patrick loved about her .



Bryan walked upstairs giving Patrick the perfect time to make his target , he didnt feel wrong for his doings but then again there was a voice in his head telling him no , but he ignoring as she gathered her things and he approach her . " What's up Breshae ? " Patrick asked smiling she quickly glanced up at him to make sure she was answering the right person , after all it was 5 boys in the house total she didnt want to call Carnell , Kelly for sure . " Oh my ! Patrick yu starled me ! How are you doing ? " She asked , as she picked up her things and fixed her hair . Patrick smiled at the little things she did , habits she had , and gessures she made at him . " Im fine , just sitting here yu know ? Admiring you flawless beauty . " Breshae looked at him awkardly , he had never said that to her escpecially since he hadnt made one effort to speak to her other than " hi " or " bye " , seeing that she was Bryan's girlfriend and they always seemed to dog Bryan out .



" Well um .. thanks Patrick . " She said attempting to walk out of his home , he blocked her way with a passionate kiss making her knees buckle . It was wayy more deeper than a typical kiss she had recieve from Bryan , and she loved it , but at the same time it confused her , before he could do anything else she pulled away from him , looked around , and whiped her lips .



" What are you doing do you know if Bry-- " Before she could say a word , Patrick pulled her into another passionate kiss , but this time instead of pushing him away she enjoyed this kiss wrapping her arms around his neck . Patrick pulled away and whiped his lip and put his finger over her mouth so she wouldnt say anything .



" Dont say anything, to anyone , after all you are my baby brother's girl , and I dont like you . " He smiled , and walked off leaving Breshae there bothered and confused .



Breshae walked in school , scattered with thoughts of Patrick , Bryan , Patrick , Patrick . She couldnt even begin to think why Patrick said those thinks to her and kissed her , not once , but twice ! She was so confused of who she wanted in her life , she continued to walked recounting everything that happened , in her head all she could think of is that it was some childish prank Patrick and his brothers were pulling againt her and Bryan . And right after she would apporach him about the situation and tell Bryan , they would luaghed at her uncontrolably and say things like : " Damn Bryan yo` girl is stoopid` as hell ! " Breshae couldnt take that much embrassment from them , and she wouldnt , she wasnt gonna tell Bryan , no matter how much she should . Still in her most inner thoughts about the situation that happen yesterday , she walked past Bryan and his friends without a simple " hi ". Confused and alittle hurt Bryan walked her way and stopped at her locker waiting for her to notice there was someone there . After 3 minutes of nothing he tapped her shoulder and she jumped .



" Look Patrick not at-- " Before anything else was said she corrected her language and addressed Bryan's presences with a passionate kiss . Bryan now confused and had questions looked at her like he had seen a ghost .

" First off , why did yu just walk past me without saying anything baby ? Whats on you mind ? Second , who taught you how to kiss like that? " Breshae smiled nervously , not knowing that she had kissed him the same way that Patrick kissed her the day before , she touched his face and looked to the side of his face and saw Patrick walking down the hall . She quickly kissed Bryan and began walked briskly to her first period trying to avoid brushing up with him while talking to Bryan, Bryan , who had a confused look on his face again just closed her locker and began to walk with his freshmen friends to there Algebra 1 class .



Breshae , still walking briskly to class found herself in a walking competion with the person behind her . Knowing it was Patrick she didnt slow down or stop she just continued to walk faster and faster , everytime he speeded up she did also . They did this up the stair and continued untill the tardy bell caught them . Breshae highly upset , and Patrick happy that he had time to talk to her about what happen , they both walked to the lunchroom for tardy block . They both sat down together and Breshae started to text to avoid direct conversation with Patrick about what happen , it didnt work .



" Why wont you talk to me ma ? " He asked , grabbing her phone and putting it on the table so she could give him her full attention . Breshae sighed and looked at him not wanting to answer him , but knew she should , something told her if she didnt he wouldnt leave the subject alone .





" I dont know Patrick , I have just been busy . " Patrick looked at her sideways knowing that she was lying , she looked out the coner of her eye and knew he wasnt buying it . She looked down and fiddled with her fingers , hoping he wouldnt ask her anything else.



" Well can we talk now ? I mean I know what I did was wrong , Im not saying it infront of everyone . But I do have feelings for you Breshae and I know its like I devoloped them over night but I am falling for you . Bryan .. I love my brother but I just dont think he is perfect for you I mean he doesnt have the maturity that I have , and he is a freshmen compared to out junior , thats just a baby ."



Breshae couldnt stand to hear any longer , she hated the way that Patrick was dogging his own brother out . First off , Bryan was a great boyfriend , he had alot of maturity more than a adverage junior could say they had in one leg . And him being younger than Breshae didnt bother her , she could take that critism more than she could of people saying that she was dating Bryan's older brother . Patrick made Breshae so mad sometimes , every since she had gotten with Bryan 9 months ago Patrick had dogged Bryan out , it always made her want to slap him . And now that he was doing it infront of him , she just want to punch him in her almond -- greenish eyes , the eyes that made her melt everytime stared her in the eye . She couldnt help but see him in a whole different light since the kiss and she hated it , her thoughts wen downward as he looked her in the eye and she began to have twisted fansties about him . She smiled and bit her lip at the fansties she thought of as he snapped in her face and called her name out to her . She quickly snapped out of her trans and looked back at him in a daze trying to remember their conversation before she drifted into a deep day dream , as soon as the organs in her mind started to function correctly she remember how furious she was at him .



" Whatever Patrick . Bryan is mature , and is just the right age for my liking okay ? I dont need you trying to play high school match maker okay . I love Bryan he is more than enough for me , unlike yourself thank you . " Breshae finally snapped back , and with that the 2nd period bell run and she got her things and stormed out of the lunchroom leaving Patrick sitting there confused and taking her lingiring fansties with her






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Dr Venomous
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 18, 2008 @ 09:37pm
lol nice story angel


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 20, 2008 @ 06:46pm
girl this is a juicey story continue to add and don't forget the juicey stuff.



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