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just random stuff i feel like writting
exactly wot it says in the title
Loves Hate
a random depressing poem my friend helped me write...she helped me get ova a guy dumping me yrs ago and this is wot she and i wrote hope you guys enjoy!

Loves Hate

The man I love has walked away,
We cannot share another day,
Pent up anger, boiling inside,
Afraid to show it I have to hide,
He walked away and left me alone,
To face the world all on my own

This man is the one I love to hate,
These feelings inside I cannot face,
I have a mask to show you,
Though what you see is quite untrue

Wasn’t I good enough? What was wrong?
Guess it’s not by your side that I belong,
Why do I hate him? I thought it was love,
Obviously it really wasn’t enough,
Why weren’t you happy?
Why couldn’t you see?
All I wanted was for you and me


Love has lost,
Depression seeps in,
My face a mask that everyone can see,
No one knows there’s a hole in my heart,
A stolen piece of me

Trapped in mounting anger,
Afraid to let it out,
Afraid of sorrow sinking in,
Afraid of being alone,
The sun of joy has set,
The moon of suffering has risen,
To prey on my emotions

What is the colour of love?
Pure white like a soaring dove?
Midnight black like the star-filled sky?

What are the colours of a lover?
Blood red?
Ocean blue?
Tree green?
These are colours I have seen,
But are they true, or masks like mine?

Why do I feel this loves hate?
Why do I love this Devils Saint?



wot dya think?
if you want to know which part she wrote i'll put it in bold.....but only if you want to know ok?






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Bringer
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 29, 2008 @ 09:37pm
I like it. It is well written and organized, that and it rhymns. I love stuff that rhymns.


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 29, 2008 @ 09:39pm
thanx friend!



Exalt Emmeryn
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Astraeus the titan
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 03, 2008 @ 01:41pm
very good u dont see very many ppl writing poems now a days biggrin


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