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Love me? (I don't know what I want) That gaze filled with sorrow Can you smile tomorrow? Beauty that you can't speak What is it that you seek? Filled with waneing desire Did I displease you sire?

Posted by: Dark Moon Princess Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 07:54am

"I've crossed oceans of time for you."[/align:8099456112]

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Commented on: Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 08:05am


	That's beautiful Sunny. I'm always jealous of how easily your rhymes seem to flow. Something puzzles me though: who is the speaker, and who is being spoken of/to? It sounds like a man being spoken to, considering "sire" there at the end...

Commented on: Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 08:14am


	I am speaking to the man I thought I loved. It can never work between us.

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Commented on: Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 08:18am

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