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This is just where I put events I feel like sharing.
In pain...

"Until Death Saves"
The worst kind of pain,
Is the kind that takes your soul,
Is the pain that ravages your body,
The pain that owns you until death.
The worst kind of pain,
Is one that cannot be counceled,
The pain that no one understands,
The pain you hold inside forever.
Hard to deal with,
Unable to be pushed aside,
Nor hidden in a broken heart,
That never knew what it felt,
To ever be whole.
The worst kind of pain,
Is pain that remains in you,
That never lets your mind at ease,
That stresses you out,
And tears you apart.
The Worst kind of pain,
Is the pain that owns you,
Until death saves your weary soul.






User Comments: [3]
menacingglowcloud
Community Member





Sat Mar 08, 2008 @ 11:44pm


Wow...that was very lovely. Deep. I like it very much. *gives 10.0*


roger3737
Community Member





Tue Mar 11, 2008 @ 03:48pm


CHI you are an awsome poet!!!i love that it is a very deep and touching poem!


ekichaba
Community Member





Wed Mar 12, 2008 @ 01:08am


Thanks! ^^ I happened to be depressed that day...LOL


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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