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Poetry of a sort
Read it, I dare you...
This feeling -poem
This Feeling
There is the feeling that I get,
When I hear your voice
When you laughter echos through my ears.
It's that feeling I get,
When I see you face
When I watch play your guitar
And this feeling comes and goes
When you leave me alone
When the dial tone hits my ears
That same feeling is there
When I dream of your face
Of the times we've spent together
But this feeling I have
Is rare and beautiful
And only when I see you
Only when I hear you
Only when I dream of you
And now I've realized
You've told me in some many ways
That this feeling is in your heart
It's one that we share for one another
And now I know...
You have this feeling too
This feeling...
I call it "Love" heart



You never know what you had until you've lost it.




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Xxtroublesome_metalheadxX
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 19, 2008 @ 06:03pm
Who might you be refering to, exactly? OHHHHH Brodie i forgot it was posted in a message,duh*SLAPS HEAD*


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 22, 2008 @ 05:55am
Wow that is really wonderful i wish i had more talent for poetry, it is such a beautiful thing that can show so much meaning, but any way it is really wonderful and ya i know it is weird for me to be commenting when i don't know you but i just thought it would be good to hear from someone that can't connect the poetry to the poet.



RIP Toes
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Shaggins Symphonic
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commentCommented on: Thu May 29, 2008 @ 01:42am
That's really good! Keep writing more! I wish I was as talented in writing as you. It comes naturally for you. heart mrgreen


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 10, 2008 @ 09:26am
Nice Jake. Thats really good. I wish I could write like that... I wrote a few but they suck!!! You rock. ^^



GreySkiez
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