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story :part 3
so as we walked past thousands of trees ..... we could hear and feel somthing breathing on both our necks we started sweeting nervously ..... .......AHHHH !!!! MY NECK SCREAMED THE GIRL...i turned around and the saber toothed tiger looked me in my eye i shooked in fear burning_eyes we both back away slowly...boom ......boom...... boom.... teh giant beats pounded on us with paws ... teh claws clawed me in my head (blood came out ) ... but i couldnt do any thing my hands were pinded down by the paw of the beast as it started to crush us more (blood came down my face,) ROAR!!!!!!! some one cuts the beast neck and distracts it.! RUN !!!!!! said the farmilier voice ill distract it !!!!! ....................... WILL THE PERSON HOLD IT LONG ENOUGH 4 THEM TO GET AWAY ...TO B CONTINUED!






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Kuromeru Ro-zu
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 08, 2008 @ 04:23am
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH exclaim cliff hanger!!!! I am gonna thoroughly stab u for doing to me wat anime has been doing to me all my life- LEAVING ME HANGING exclaim exclaim

jk jk about the violence lol


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