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The strangest things go through my head

I don't know what I am going to use that for, but I just had the urge to write it.


He looked at her and smiled, a warm flicker of amusement in his eyes, and he said softly “I’ve missed you.”
Without looking at him she replied, “I didn’t know I had left.”
He rolled his eyes and sighed, “Don’t be naive, you know what I mean.”
She finally looked at him, “and don’t treat me like a pawn, you know I don’t play chess.”
He laughed, a dry bittersweet sarcastic laugh, “Of course not, you were always preferred dancing, moving from one step to the next consistently, never committing to a particularly move.”
She summed up her courage and looked him directly in the eyes, “I guess then you would have been the tango, a dance filled with hesitations and pauses.”
He didn’t miss a beat, “if only it could have been more like salsa, fluent and movement with feeling: not thinking.”
She smiled, a soft, fake smile, “you never provided a good enough lead.”
He didn't reply and they just stood for a moment looking at each other, their eyes expressing more of their bitter memories than words ever could.






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Iano_Rujin
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 19, 2008 @ 03:10am
Ok so I've been stalling for the longest while trying to come up with a proper comment that can do justice. This is beyond brilliant, its captivating, exciting, epic

ME LOVE IT!!!


commentCommented on: Thu Jun 19, 2008 @ 03:13am
How epic Munchkin...I can see you are at a loss for words -cough-



blueroseayumi143
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Flaous
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 19, 2008 @ 05:38am
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i cant put my finger on it, but i got a weird sense of deja vu reading that


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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 19, 2008 @ 08:03pm
Kinda reminds you of that conversation you never had with that girl you never met but you know it would be just like that when it didn't happen

EPIC, Poppet, It's Exquisite, Powerful, Intense, Chilling EPIC,



Iano_Rujin
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blueroseayumi143
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 22, 2008 @ 02:00am
Lol. Munchkin, I am trying to figure out if you are being insulting or not---don't be rude ! We all know that's the way you wanted things to be for you -cough cough- -wink- Darling, LIVE AND LET DIE.

@Flaous Well I don't know, it just came to me and I just had to write it.


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 23, 2008 @ 10:31am
NO insults, I know it sounds borderline but its what came from the muse so I put it down. sue me. Take no offense my friend at whom this was directed.



Iano_Rujin
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blueroseayumi143
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 12:55am
-sigh- Fine fine Ima write some more when I chase my sister away


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