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Okay so u guys r very lucky. I never let anyone read my stories and trust me no matter how many times they ask i will always say no. I am very hmm i guess self conscious about the stories i write so if u like this one plz plz tell me and i might write more! Okay here it goes. . .(p.s i wrote this as an assignment for english its supposed to be scary)

That One Day
It was an ordinary day, a day like every other day in October. I wasn't expecting anythi8ng unusual to happen, but it did. I went to school but on my way home i passed by the strange house on Strawberry Road. No one ever went in there and no one has ever lived there, it was too scary. Today however there was a thin young woman with long coal black hair and grey cold eyes, staring at me from the attic window.I don't know why I was so curious, but before i knew it I was at the front door. Before i could knock on the door the same lady opened the door. I blurted out, "Hi I'm Stella, whats your name?" In a slow steady voice with a sense of hesitation she replied, "Lola Vatinue, My name is Lola Vatinue." Without another word she shut the door in my face. Rumor had it that the house was always unlocked so I went to the back and opened the door. I peered through the door like I had once before, only then I found myself running for my mommy. Now I was not afraid. I walked in very cautiosly toward the living room. I only peeked inside for fear of being discovered. A bony bald man sat in a dusty chair that looked like it once was purple but now was brown from age.He spoke in a hushed tone to Lola , who was standing across the room. I gathered from their conversation his name was Charlie. I gasped when I realized what they were talking about. I had heard about a string of robberiesin the area, but what they were saying gave me a reason to believe they were behind them.
To be continued. . .
Sorry but it will take too long to write it all down today.
Toodles