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Ri's Future Mangas
These are my stories that I hope to turn into manga! Leave me a comment on what you think, but don't be too mean!!!
S~M~I~L~E Beginning of Chapter 1
Chapter 1


A young man stood on the edge of a building, a smirk crossed his face as he gazed about the city. His black trench flapped in the wind, and his face was shielded from view by the darkness. It was a typical city, a normal busy neon lighted city, the noise of pubs, ambulances, parties, clubs, sirens, a trains roaring horn and the headlights and engines of cars. The young man turned and walked towards the corner of the building and his smirk grew wider.


“Come out, come out where ever you are. My dear, I want to see you.”
(he utters in a chilling icy voice)


He points his hand towards a nearby bank, an eight story building. “Bang.” he utters and a large explosion erupts from the bank. The large explosion triggers smaller but frequent explosions.
“It’s time for you to come out darling, time for you to come and play!” he yelled and began to laugh, a sharp and chilling laugh. The building continued to roar in explosions as he laughed.


(A medium size house is focused on and the angle moves to a young girls room; a young girl is asleep in her bed.)
Ionia was asleep in her bed, huddled up and perfectly comfortable, a typical teenager in dreaming heaven. She moans and rolls over in her bed, when a sudden ray of sunlight is let into her room. Ionia squeaks and covers her head with the comforter. Her nearby Icap holder clicks and starts the alarm; the local teen radio station comes on.


“Hey! Good Morning, or should I say bad morning to all those teens out there. That’s right all you chicks and guys its return day; the day back to school after New Year’s and Christmas break! Hopefully all you guys and gals are ready out there, and if you’re not…BEST OF LUCK!!! Now you have 30 minutes to get to your schools and wake up to a new morning. Now for our morning mix! Starting off with, ‘Heart Beat’ by Kawaii Kytties!”


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User Comments: [2]
Arnarkey
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Sun Jun 29, 2008 @ 08:28am


i write stories to....right now i'm writing a book. ^_^


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Dashinator
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Tue Jul 01, 2008 @ 03:00pm


i just read it.... ITS FANTASTIC, you are such a great writer... i love the story whee i can't wait until i can read part 2, even if i have to buy it whee heart


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