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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
woah....2 comments on the same day i wrote the last one...
ok, thanks guys.... my cuz nejiha and my trusted friends/story advisor Winery both commented the same day thati posted! heart thanks guys...and since the fortold 2 comments have been made it is time to fetch the key to my pride (my baseball bat) wink and write! blaugh


wahmbulance wahmbulance Susan was well and truly miserable... she was in the middle of one of her 'spells' . It sorta chafed that the TV people were right in the fact that the victems heart acually stoped....
it wasn't a BAd fealing nessicarily...just kinda like she was driftin...like she was detached from the world....and that the was acually seeing it clearly for the first time. the Drifting part was nice...the needle's in her arms didn't pinch so much...almost like they were stuck in another person...but the alertness...that made the needles painfull...and all too real. And the fact that she was being forced to talk and comunicate during her 'spells' was a source of great iritation to her.

The docters though she was getting better...and they were very insistent to try to figure our how she got it...to put it short they were prying into her life, but with susans parents...or namely mother you could understand why she didn't like these hairless babbons invading her private life.
you would think that being cooped up in a hostpital for three weeks would improve her mental immage of docters, riht? wrong.


she forced her attention back onto whan her favriot nurse was saying. something abut her dog...Susan was kinda bemused, once the docters figured out what nurse she liked better they made attend her any time she had a 'spell'. Susan didn't mind it...it kept her mind off off the needls that seemed to be not there, and altogether too real at the same time...
" So yea, enough about me....What about you Susan? If you don't mind me asking...what IS you favriot animal?" the nurse, Amanda, asked kindly.
"uh...i dunno..." susan frowned...the drifting was skatering her thoughts. " I kinda alwase have liked Linxes...but as a house pet....a Raccoon....mabey..." Amanda laughed.
" AWWW!!! racoons are so CUTE!!! my cousin had one once!!!! her naem was Joslin!" And then She started rambling on about her cousins pet racoon. Susan grined. Amanda was SOOO predictable. wahmbulance wahmbulance






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Nejiha
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commentCommented on: Sun Jul 06, 2008 @ 12:43am
I love that and that nurse wow that is he-lary-ous!! blaugh


commentCommented on: Sun Jul 06, 2008 @ 01:40am
I liked the part with the nurse, too. It was interesting to see how Susan interacts with other people. And I also liked how you described Susan's "spells" that she has. I felt more like I could understand what she was going through. Once again, nice entry!



Winry_Rockbell799
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