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susan entry 7...is having problems...advise is being asked 4 ok...i'm gonna start numbering these...it's getting kinda confuseing to me...but i can't go back and re name them...so here we go, entry # 7!! ....ok i'm at a loss as to how i should continue this... immage of me thrashing about in water HELP MEHHH!!!

Posted by: Sakuka Mon Jul 07, 2008 @ 12:25am

Anime obsessed Blond. Book obsessed Nerd. Video game obsessed Bookworm. Music obsessed Authoress. Life obsessed Emo. Cuddle-less Cuddle-bug.... I'm a Contradiction.

And Guess what?

I like it.

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Neko_Bri
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Commented on: Mon Jul 07, 2008 @ 01:12am


	as for right now I'd say PLOT TWIST! Have her go into a spell and escape or something! Make it cool! Make it a big change of pace!

Commented on: Mon Jul 07, 2008 @ 02:19am


	I agree with the other comment. A plot twist right now would be a great way to continue. Maybe you could actually write out in a scene one of the spells.

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