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Allyssa
NO! She's not a girl I like to anyone reading this other than Vivi, Dark and possibly Mia. ((dunno if Mia caught that her name was Allyssa...anyways))

HERE YA GO. The part that you will miss Dark. If anyone else wantz ta read, go right ahead. (SCurry story XF))


“Mercy! Merc- ok ok mercy.” Jane stopped and patted his head. She grabbed her back pack once more and before leaving his room looked back and said
“Next time. It could be worse” Joking of course, she walked off to her room and put her bag down by her bed. She looked out her window and stretched, then something furry ran across her leg on the floor.
“Oh! Hey Sprinkles!” Jane said picking up her cat and cuddling her. “Hey baby, did you miss me? Hmm?? She nuzzled the cat, to which the cat just received it and meowed. Jane put her down and organized her backpack. She turned on her pc and took the scrunchy out of her hair, and shook her hair about. It felt good to have it out. She liked her pony tell, ‘but she didn’t have to be beautiful all the time.’ Jane thought. Especially not at home. As the windows tone chimed and the fans spinning in the cpu of her computer. She did love the thing, its nice large wide monitor, its photo shop download, the internet connection and wifi. It was an awesome computer. Given to her by her grandparents, she thanked them so much, that they forced her away to go hook it up when she first got it.
Her Cat meowed once more and watched Jane, flicking it’s tail about. Sprinkles was a female Persian, and adorable. Well, at least to Jane. She didn’t know who wouldn’t like her cuddly friendly kitty, but someone might not. LIKE ME AHAHA ((I’ll delete this later XD))
Finally the pc was up and running. Good thing too, it takes long to start but man is it worth it. Three whole minutes to start, Jane doesn’t have that time gosh! She checked all the websites she normally went on, watched a video or two, and even googled a recipe for blue rice crispy treats. The thought of Brian entered her mind. He was a hottie that was for sure. Man! She’d be talking to him tonight! Yeah she’s talked to him before, said hi, even talked to him about Geometry class for 5 minutes one time, but this time, they’re going to talk on the phone, probably more than 5 minutes too!
Jane was about to watch a you tube fan video of My Chemical Romance, when she noticed something. It was odd…as if something was different. She turned around and watched her Cat. Sprinkles was looking straight out the window to that creepy house across the street. Earie…
“Sprinkles?” Jane called softly, moving over to where her cat was, and looking at her with concern. “Hunny, it’s just a house..do you see a bird or a butterfly?” The cat didn’t seem to move, it’s tail didn’t flick and it’s ears were perked straight stiff. Jane looked over to the house and saw why. A girl stood in the window. Jane jumped a little out of surprise. There was no one living there, I mean, look at it! Windows beaten and patched up, rust all over the metal gutter, roof tiles missing and weeds everywhere, it was an eyesore really, but there was someone in the second story window. The girls hair was in her face, long blackish-brown hair, and the girl wore a black school girl uniform, a skirt and little black shoes. Jane got a little closer to the window, when her mom called from downstairs,
“JAAANNE! DINNER!” She jumped and closed her eyes to catch her breath and turned around. “Ok mom hang on.” she called back, then turning back around to see the girl once more, she was gone. Out of sight? Weird, why was there a girl in that house? Maybe she should tell her parents or something. Well, she shook it off and walked down stairs, Sprinkles stayed right where she was.
“HEY! There’s my angel!” her father announced smiling, taking off his business coat and hugging Jane. Her father and her also had a good relationship. They’ve gone fishing, bowling, her father even went to sewing classes with her, and gladly did it too.
“Hey Daddy!” She said hugging him. “Was work cool?”
“Yeah, the normal. I did sell two more properties though, so a little extra money.”
Mr. Ray was about 6’0 and had short blackish-brown hair. He usually had a smile as well, and a bit paler skin tone, that’s where Jane got hers from. A Jolly good hearted man. Deep dark blue eyes to go along with that nice set of teeth he had.
“Well that’s terrific!” Mrs. Ray declared, putting the chicken in the middle of the table. “I’m so glad, maybe now we could get a new Lamp in our room? You know, the one on your side of the table. It’s so old and worn, we could use a new one.” He smiled and said “If you really want one. They’re not that expensive anyways.” Mrs. Ray smiled back and nodded in agreement.
So this was it. Jane’s family, a pretty good one at that. She lived in a two story house in a great neighborhood and great environment, other than that creepy broken down house, which now held even more questions.
After they prayed, they ate and all complemented Mrs. Ray on her fantastic work. A whole chicken with pineapple around it, accompanied with lemon pepper seasoning. Butter roles, salad, and their choice of juice or milk. She was a great cook. After dinner, the first guest arrived. Jane forgot all telling her mother and father about seeing a girl in the house across the street.
As Jane opened the door, who else but Alex was there to hug and greet her. Stacy stepped in afterward and closed the door behind.
“This is going to be so much fun!” Alex announced excited. Jane agreed and broke out a few giggles of excitement. Stacy rolled her eyes, but yes, it would be loads of fun tonight. A few minutes later, try twenty-one minutes later, but whatever; Maria and Lauren show up. “Hey Girls!!” Maria proclaimed hugging them all and laughing. Lauran smiled and said hi to everyone.
“Did you bring food?” Stacy asked as they began to climb the stairs. The door to Todd’s room shut, and you could hear Todd speaking to online players through his microphone. More like, shouting and yelling ‘GO GO GO, SNIPER- GET DOWN- NO I DIED GET HIM!’
“Of course I did chica!!” Maria said showing the soda and donuts. Stacy lifted up 3 bags of chips, Alex showed the pretzels. Lauren smiled and pulled out of her bag, 3 Papa Johns Pizzas. They all gawked at this.
“Dang Lauren, show us up.” Maria said with a false attitude. Lauren blushed and they all laughed some with her.
Soon enough near all the food was gone. The pretzels remained because, well come on, look at all their other options. The night went on and finally, time to call Brian. Jane was a little nervous, but she wasn’t going to back down. Besides, her friends were all their with her, if she tried, Maria would pummel her, heck Lauren might even get in a few shots.
Jane shushed them to near silence as the phone rang. One ring…Two rings…Three.. This was unbearable. Finally on the sixth ring, a voice came on. “Hello?”
Jane was sure it was him, but just in case she’d play it safe. Better safe than sorry, right?
“Hi, this is Jane, is Brian there?” She asked biting her lower lip to keep from blushing and laughing, though it didn’t really work, and Alex began to laugh at seeing Jane’s attempt at holding laughter and blushing back.
“Oh! Hey Jane what’s up?” The jock asked in a more happier tone now. He had the kind of voice a surfer would have. The cliché type anyways. You know the one.
“Oh, nothing much really.” She replied as the girls giggled and joked in the background. The conversation was a bit dull, but Jane liked it regardless of how much they said or how meaningful the conversation was. She felt that Brian liked it also.
“Alright, I’ll see you around. Bye!” came the voice from the other end of the line. “Good bye” Jane said and hung up the phone.
“Aaaghh!!” The girls screamed and squealed and all at once attacked Jane with complements and saying “Oh he SO likes you!” and “You have to talk to him more, get to know him more he’s a hottie!” and so on. This WAS a good idea. Having this sleep over, it was so much fun and just what Jane needed. Stupid school was eating away at her at times. This was a nice relaxing change.
Jane stopped in a fog. She was in her neighborhood and fog was all around. She could only see 50 feet in front of her it seemed. She wandered about. Had an eerie feeling. She watched that creepy abandoned house across the street from her house as she passed it. Finally she called out. “Hello? Hello?” Nothing. No one answered. It was quiet. So quiet, no wind, no echoes, nothing but the dark gray pavement, a few beige and grey houses, and the trees every now and then, when the fog allowed it.
She continued to walk. ‘Where is everyone, and what’s with all this fog? Why is it so quiet?..’ she asked herself in her thoughts. Suddenly, up ahead! A human! Oh good, it was beginning to get creepy. All alone here, in this dense fog and just no one around- Jane stopped and stared. It wasn’t human.
Ahead of her 50 feet, came a human like figure. It had 3 arms on one side of it’s body, the third smaller than the other two. One leg was bent backwards so it limped toward her, the other normal. A brownish red tint to its skin, one arm on the other side, a head like shape but no features. Vein covered it limped on. Jane backed up wide eyed. ‘What the hell!’ she thought to herself. Suddenly, an bone chilling noise rushed past her. It was an odd echoing ghost like moan. It swept past her and went around her. Like Head phones in her ear. At one part it would play in the right, and then moan over to the left and kept whooshing around her. Jane began to shake. She backed up more but the creature kept coming. It twitched vigorously every now and then, like it had been shot in the shoulder by a magnum, it lurched back and kept coming, twisting it’s head like figure around. It then itself began to howl and screech. It was so awful, the noise sent chills down her spine to her very veins and heart. She began to panic and tears filled her eyes and streamed out. The thing moaned some more and limped after her, convulsing and spilling blood as it came closer. It’s skin would fall off at parts, just like wet paper, it would fall. It twitched more and another vigorous shake of its upper torso.
Jane began to run, she ran so for about fifteen seconds, and then in front of her, she saw two more of those things. Same tint, same basic structure- deformality. One on its legs had no head, and no arms either. It just walked toward her cross legged, and nearly fell over a good number of times. The other on all fours spider like, sniffing the earth it seemed as it crawled forward. The noises grew stronger- Louder, more immense. The noise itself was Gosh just- so- It’s unexplainable. You want to cry so much when you hear it, it’s so evil sounding, so horrifying, twisted, dark. Now they were closing in! MORE CAME,- from behind cars, houses, or just plain out of the fog! A good twenty of the things, the deafening sound of them all around her, they kept coming. Their skin falling off! Bleeding, MOANING SCREECHING, HOWLING, REACHING OUT FOR HER AS IF SHE WERE THE ONLY THING DRIVING THEM, SOME HAD NO HANDS, NO LEGS- ONE WAS ONLY LEGS, A TORSO WITH 5 LEGS- SOME ON ALL FOURS SCREECHING, MOANING THE SOUND WAS SO UNBEARABLE, I CANNOT DESCRIBE IT JANE SCREAMED AS THEY ENCLOSED HER, THE FLESH FALLING OFF THEIR ROTTING SMELLING OF SEWAGE AND BLOOD SKIN, RIB CAGES COULD BE SEEN IN SOME, THEY CLOSED IN, BEGAN TO RAKE AWAY AT HER STOMACH WITH CLAWS, NEEDLE LIKE FINGERS, INSECT LIKE BLADE ARMS, THEY KEPT MOANING AND SCREECHING, HOWLING, LIKE BABIES THEY SCREAMED SO IMMENSE- Jane awakes screaming
“NOOO NO GET THEM OFF!!!!” She yells and falls out of her bed “HELP ME SOME ONE GET THEM OFF!!!” She is In a state of panic. Maria grabs her and holds her down.
“Shhh!! It’s ok Jane Jane! It was just a dream Jane!” The girls looked over Jane, over her terrified expression on her face, over the tears streaming down her eyes and her neck muscles flexing out of fear, her leg twitching. Alex grabbed her leg.
“It’s alright Jane..shhhhh..” Alex said calmly. Maria still holding her down looked over to Alex with a worried expression, then to Lauren, who looked terrified, and to Stacy, who also looked frightened and concerned.
Jane stared into Alex’s eyes, motionless, then finally spoke- softly in a whisper she said slowly; “They were all over me….Alex, al- all over me and-.” her voice broke, she gasped for air and breathed heavy a few breaths.
“It was just a dream Alex said, looking concerned. Maria wasn’t holding Jane down anymore. She joined Stacy and Lauren in standing. They all looked very worried.
With a strained deep breath and still sweating, Jane told Alex; “I could smell them, hear them. …feel them.” She looked down at her stomach that was fine.
“Who, Jane, who could you hear smell and feel?” Alex asked, probing now.
Jane shook her head. She began to cry once more. What just happened to her? That was so realistic, she was sure it was real,- Very glad it wasn’t, but sure it was real. ..The noise they made was so bone gnashing. Their claws and blade like arms, their stench…the howling, screeching, screaming and moaning…what was that?






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Mourn-and-Torn
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 05:51am
AW MAN D: IT LOOKS BETTER ON WORD!!! I copy pasted the big spaces, so you can't see the indention marks X-X POOEY!! The format was purty good too... oh well, hope that isn't an annoyance to read like a foot over XD.


commentCommented on: Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 05:53am
and gold. domokun



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DiamondSealsPearls
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 06:10pm
<____< ward vivi told me her name was allyssa before she told you...and i was there when you told the story..im not that much of an idiot D:


commentCommented on: Thu Jul 10, 2008 @ 06:17pm
Really nice story btw : ) its better now that you edited it biggrin good job



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