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i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
#11 Nicolas Wislen
THANK YOU WINERY!!! AND THANK YOU NEJIHA! you've made it so i can post 2 in a day! i LOVE these days!!!! and you read what i wrote up here to!!!1 *hugs u both*

wahmbulance Susan felt herself giggle as the train seemed to go on whistling wor quite a while. She couldn't help it. Her mirth seem ed infectious as The strange man's mouth quirked and he started chuckluing. by the time the train fell silent they were both roaring with laughter.


After they calmed them selfs down (which was like 10 minutes later). The ma Grined and held out his hand. " Sorry about that, My name's Nicholas Wislen." Susan found his grin just as infectious as his laughter. She grined right back, pushing all thoughts of her kidnaping aside and shook his hand.

" Susan Hadings" she replied cheerfully. 'Just ignore the fact the man kidnaped you from a perfectly secure holding cell in a hospital. and when your not in a DEEP spell his voice want's to make you Scream and either runn away or kill yourself to keep him away' the thought made the grin slide of her face and stare at his hand which had just relised hers. Her hand was cold and made most people flinch away from her touch while she was in a spell....and also the room was warm enough for her. Usually when it was warm enough most people were sweating within munuits of entering the room. she studied his face like she studied hers in her mirror. 'He has the same pale look...the same Red lines running acrost the right side of his face...oh...my...god...he has the same deisies!!!' at that she gasped and stumbled back a bit in suprise. he had been watching her face and sighed.

" it's alright. I brought you here to explain." he scowled a bit at a thought. "also that Damn Hospital" he spat the word" was going to starve you to death." susan jumped, she remebered how hungry she had been, and that nothing she ate seemed to satisfy her hunger. Nicolas started pacing, from a door to the window and back. she had the feeling that he paced there alot., there was a worn path in the carpet.

"...I'm not sure..." nicolas stared at her for a second and a smile quirked his mouth once more, Susan Had the feeling that it was hard for him to stay mad long.

" of course...it's my fault entirly that they got their filthy hands on you in the first place." he sighed " I was suposed to bring you here after i poisened you. but you called a warning and i got thrown out of the store." he pressed his pale lips together at the memory. " And you didn't leave by the door you wen't in by so i had to track you down all over again.by the timei found you you were already in that stupid prison..." he traild off looking iritated. " And once i found you...sheesh, you were dieing!" this seemed to make him mad all over again and he paced once more.

susan Stared at him. She had been DIEING?! " how was i..." she found it suddenly hard to speak. " erm...Fading?" she fund that as a better way to utter such a thought.

He turned and chuckled slightly. " those idiots were starving you to death" he said it as if it wa a simple matter of fact.

Susan stared at him as something he had said before jumped at her. " YOU POISENED ME?!?!" her voice was neirly a shreak ast she pointed at him and stumbled back. She replayd the scene in the store. she didn't remember any needles or anything...

Nicolas Held up his hands in defence. "I had to!" his voice was slightly paniced. " It's Not like you wern't going to die soon anyway!!!" THAt caught her off gard.

"wh-what?" Susan beifly wondered if so many suprises were healthy.

Nicolas sighed again and stared at her with mournfull eyes. " A few weeks ago You...constracted a Mortal Illness...I'm not sure whitch...Buti was able to...detect it in your system." he stared at her face again and she self consiously fingered the 3 red lines starting at her eye and running in a curved line to under her ear and into her hair." I had been watching you...I was curiouse...you seemed like asuch an odd girl..." he ran his fingeres though his black hair , Swiping it out of his face " but i'd grown ...fond of you...i couldn't let you die in such an underhand way..." he sighed and held out his hands ina n innocent gesture "Please forgive me...I couldn't think of anything else to do!"

Susan was pressed against the wall by the end of his story, her hand clasped around her neck as she stared at him. How the heck were you suposed to respond to that? wahmbulance

how do you think she should respond?






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Nejiha
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 03:53am
hm....i think she should rant at him for a minite then give in and forgive him.


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 04:20am
I think Nejiha is right. That would be a really interesting scene. ^_^ And I liked this part really well!!! I loved how we get to see how he thinks about her and how he wanted to help her, but the whole poisoning thing also makes it really interesting. I'm glad you added a new entry today, let me know when you add another XD



Winry_Rockbell799
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Neko_Bri
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 05:54am
hah, Sakuka's got some active readers, huh. I'd like to see something less cliche than what the others said, but wouldn't be able to give you an alternative without writing it myself. ^^; Write on, Sakuka! Write on!


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