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Feeling Bad
Sad
Mad
Never glad
Feeling bad
Is being down
Is crying out loud
Like a waterfall
Rushing
Or you just got dumped
Feeling bad
Is being sad
And mad
But never
Glad crying






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Emo_Wuvs_Haylie
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 02:29am
i get the emotion and main poitn but poetry is more than making rhymes, try to get more rhythem in and extend more upon thought.


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