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Pwease o3o?
someone acually cares
my cloths soaked as the rain pounded
against my body...walking down the dark road that never ends
i could hear your laughter from even in the farthest shadows...tears run
down my face but no one could tell thats why i enjoy the rain
i drop to my knees when u come forward
i scream but there is no one to be found u look down at me
and smile i could see ur devil horns rise out of your boneless head.......
you pull out a knife ready to abuse me i cry once more
then u stab me in the chest laughing at me
my cry useless u hold the blade up to ur mouth and
and lick the the red dripping blood that i lost..i look down
ready for another hit i knew that today was my death date
i hear someone scream running after me
u look at him thinking another victim to kill i slowly smiled
puddles splashed as u came running..i stood up telling him to stay back
ignored me and looked at my wouns he could tell this
happened more then once he took me hand
and promised i would be safe..but he walked up to you
and threw the dagger he tried to dodge but it hit his arm going through
ur arm u try to hide ur face trying not to show pain
u pulled the dagger from ur arm and run
he smirks u still run after him! but he pulls out a
long sword abuot to hit ur beautiful flesh then i run and stand in front of
u blocking ur pain and taking it..blood falls onto the
the ground with the rain washing it away
both of u guys eyes grow wide i pull out the sword trying
not to fall i stab him senceless and keep going then his pulse stopped
i hit his heart we both smiled ...i turn to u and you hold me
i look into ur eyes and kiss u..we blushed
and i fell without warning onto the ground u carried me
home and and lay me down.putting a rag filled with hot water on my
four head...from this day on i will never forget about how
someone acually carred for me...........






dont know why i wrote this sweatdrop sweatdrop sweatdrop sweatdrop sweatdrop






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x-xvoidaccountx-x
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 09, 2008 @ 06:37pm
Wow, that was very well-writen. I loved it, it was very visual. 5/5


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 30, 2008 @ 09:40pm
whoa tht was good how did ya learn to write tht suff



jaydiie
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xXalone but not lostXx
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commentCommented on: Tue Sep 30, 2008 @ 09:40pm
that was really really good ^_^


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