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...Forever....
If You Truly Loved Me
I give all credit to this poem to Savie considering the fact that she started it and I just added my own part of it.......


( she says....) If u truly loved me...
Would u cry if my last breath was today
would u understand if I had to leave
If u truly loved me...
If u were lost on a unknown island and u had to choose one person...would it be me
If I was standing in the rain...would u let me in
If u truly love me...
If a hug is what I needed would ur arms open to me
would u be there when I need someone to listen
If u truly loved me...

(I say...) If I truly loved you...
I would cry if you took your last breathe today
I would understand if you had to leave
If I truly loved you...
I would choose you to be with me if I were on an unknown island
I admit that if you were in the rain I wouldn't let you in, I would come outside with you in the rain.
If I truly loved you...
My arms would be forever open for you
I would forever listen to you
If I truly loved you...


Now when I say " She " I'm not pointing anyone out yet..... I'm still waiting for her to decide, whoever she may be...






User Comments: [2]
X-Silently Dying-X
Community Member





Wed Aug 20, 2008 @ 10:58am


Honestly I'm glad u answered that poem...no one has done it as well as u...this dude tried -Horrible- u replied to this poem way better than anyone so far.. thank u >.<


Kurai DarkWolf
Community Member





Mon Jan 26, 2009 @ 01:59am


Wow... That's so cool! Lol. Hey, I'm Nami's friend. She told me you were really cool so I looked you up. Lol. Comment back, plzzzz.


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