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What is going on with my life?!?
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Yokiko_Masami
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 08, 2005 @ 12:38am
Ooh. Interesting. I like the fight scene. :3
It's a really good start. I, personally, would like to read a continuation later on, so I expect to see one later. ^.^


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 08, 2005 @ 12:46am
Thnx, oh yeah. I can't seem to come up with a title yet, so let me know if you have a good one



Tatsumi Takeshima
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OrigamiSnowball
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 08, 2005 @ 12:50am
It sounds very good so far. 3nodding ^_^


commentCommented on: Thu Sep 08, 2005 @ 01:21am
Love the start of it even though its short right now, short 'en sweet! ^^ i would love to see more of it!



Black Cello
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The White Paffle Negus
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 08, 2005 @ 02:01am
you are so good.......i'm a little jealous sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Wed Sep 28, 2005 @ 02:04am
You have a few minor errors, such as 'your' instead of 'you're,' but other than that, 'tis quite good.^^



Arlunia
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