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RIN-CHAN IS A GOOD GIRL!!!!
Who is he?
"RIN! RUN!" a boy with solid black hair and blue eye screammed."b-but r-rin-ch-chan d-d-don" i studderred but was cut off bye him screamming once more, he was holding back a vampire like creature with pail skin, blood shot eyes, and lizard like tail. Its screches echoed through my ears as i stood there trembling in fear.It soundded like a poor woman being stabbed reapettedly.The boy yelled over and over "PLEASE! PLEASE RIN RUN! GO NOW!!!" but the only reply I could give was studdering words and me standing there in horror.I was terrofide, terrofide for the boys sake.Suddunly the boy loses his grip and the beast breaks free."Noooooooo!!!" he sreaches racing twords me and sheilding me. Blood splatters every where as i remane there horifide and he falls to the floor. With his last breath he whispers in pain "rin please run i-i dont want you hurt i-i lov..." He had died then and there. I freak at the site of this as the blood thirsty monster slowly walks closer and closer to me .I quickly jump up and run for it.I run side to side down a slimmy tunnel as the creatture chases after me. I start to cry as flash backs of the boy dieing enter my mind.SLAM!!!!!!!!the clock hits the floor and i awake with these word and these words only "Who was he?......."









please coment and tell me how it was and i will make more ...






User Comments: [2]
Ainsi dans lamour
Community Member





Fri Aug 22, 2008 @ 07:57am


This is an awesome peice of work. I want to know what the hell that creature is xd

Make another one! Make another one!


Xxunknown_penguinxX
Community Member





Fri Aug 22, 2008 @ 09:07am


that was pretty ******** awesome..


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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