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What is wrong with this world? I'll tell ya!!!

Yukiko- Keeper of Dreams
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 @ 01:21am

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Naree
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Commented on: Sat Sep 24, 2005 @ 06:24am


	cries That was nice...the tempo or pace of the poem is a little uneven. good use of puncuation and love the spelling and grammer...after all, a poem is a broken up story. Still... sniffle

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