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this is a story of lou-qin-qou (tenchi masaki) protecter of the holy gate the only way to get to heaven. this is a story of his destiny of becoming the first ..well..youll have to read the whole story :3 characters: cheeriotwist as ryoko, zack-leader of shinra as tenchi masaki [more casting is soon to come]

CHAPTER ONE: THE BEGINING

*afternoon**birds cherping in the trees over head* a gust of winds slowly gusts feeling like a paint brush on my face*
tenchi:*sigh* i never get any visitors here in the forest..why am i posted here anyways?*sits on chair and leans back on holy gate**yawn..* ima..*yawn* feeling kimnda tired *yawn* il..just..tak.a goo..nap....*falls asleep*
*next day*
tenchi:*wakes up* hmm? what?? have i been asleep that long? gah! awell i w2as tired.. at least nobody saw me >_> <_<.
*as the night slowly crept up tenchi was careless thinking that nobody would come* he gently put his bamboo staff against the arch and his 2 tankukas *legendary gaurdian..racoon type thing* were sleeping in the grass. as tenchi almost fell asleep again he heard rustling in the bushes..he didnt think it was anything untill a dark unhuman figure attackt him as he fell to the floor.
tenchi: what the hell??
he looked up and the figure was gone and he wondered why his tanukas didnt aware him..he caustiosly crept toward the 2 sleeping tanukas he trie to wake them but they didnt..as he was afraid of someone has casted a "sleep" spell on them when tenchi fell asleep..tenchi was glad the spell only lasts 24 2 hours...he kept pondereing on what attacked him..for the next 5 hours he was wondering why didnt his tanukas didnt wake up..but then a thought came to his head..he thought that the dark figure that attacked him was a high lvl black mage..there "sleep" spells usually work on longer..like 24 hours or less...

the next day

when he woke up from his nape he immediatly jumped off his chair. then he saw that his tanukas werent there.
tenchi:wh..where are you guys? chincho! tankana! where are you guys?
*bush rustls behind him he immediatly turns around and grabs his staff and gets into a combat position*
tenchi::hello? whos there!
*he opens the bush then IMMEDIATLY A...to be continued

continued of chapter 1

he opens the bush then immediatly his 2 tanukas jump out and on to his face.
tenchi: wth! were have u guys been??
chincho:sorry master we woke and and we looked for food..
tenchi:did you find any?
chincho:....
tanaka:no master we couldtn find any in this forest.
tenchi: dang..an angel can only go 4 days without food...i cant leave my post so..do u think one of you can go out and look for food?
chincho: no master we have to stick together
tenchi surprised kay...be here in 3 hours with food ok?
chincho,tanaka:yes master!
as chincho and tanaka ran off for food tenchi could feel something bad coming his way..that is why he wanted them gone long enough so they wont get hurt.

1 hour passes still no sign of anyone..tenchi sits back on his chair and leans it against the gate. holding his staff just incase of an ambush.
tenchi:gah! were are they? even though its only been an hour im hungry!
suddenly he feels a presence...a mist suddenly forms..tenchi suddenly gets into a combat position
a girl comes out of the mist..with blue hair and black eyes wearing blue and black.
she walks up to tenchi and looks up

????: (shyfully)escuse me..can you show me to the next vilage?
tenchi: umm sure its past those bushes but becare full theres a hill.
???? surprised kay thanks! umm..if u mind if i ask...*blushes* whats your name?
tenchi: oh..my anme is tenchi masaki
????: oh my name is ryoko.
tenchi: nice name oh..you should run off now..you wouldnt want it to get dark
ryoko: oh..thanks i forgot about that *runs off* i hope i see you again!
tenchi: you too! hey becarefull of the hill!
*girl dissapears into the woods*
*tenchi thinks about her*
tenchi:i wonder why i felt her aura to be bad...i hope i do see her again
chincho:hey! master! we have some berries and nuts!
tanaka:but guess what?
tenchi:what?
tanaka:we call the nuts
tenchi surprised kay okay

night falls

as tenchi eats his last berry he falls asleep and dreams of nizumei..
*dream=
ryokocome on this way!
tenchi:*laughs* okay okay im coming were runing through the woods the least you can do is slow down.
ryoko:*laughs* okay okay :3 slowpoke
tenchi: i am not D:
ryoko:yes you are
tenchi:maybe a little
ryoko:makes a path in a bush* here we are!
*birds cherping and a lake with a fantastic veiw appears with trees in the backround while the sun shins on the lake*
tenchi: wow! how did you find this place?
ryoko:i was walking untill i fell in the water
tenchi:*laughs*
ryoko sets up a blanket and sits on it*
ryoko:come on slowpoke site down with me!
tenchi surprised kay okay
as tenchi sits he blushes and she blushes then ryoko puts her head on tenchis chest and looks up and moves closer to his lips**tenchi moves closer to her lips as well they both close there eyes and kiss* everymoment just seemed to came to life* untill when tenchi woke up*
tenchi:huh? what??
*tanukas are asleep*
tenchi:*wispers..its morning already?* damn

continued of chapter 1

as the morning grwe tenchi kept thinking of that girl he would sometimes say her name softly while chincho and tanaka were out for food
tenchi:were are you guys?? you were suppose to be here an hour ago....maybe i should look for them..but..i have to watch the gate..ummmm..ah! i got it!
*tenchi pulls out an angel chain and he puts it around the gate*
tenchi:ha..now they wont come in...i better be back very soon..this chains magic only lasts for 2 hours..
*as tenchi runs through the forest for about 2 miles here heres a faint cry for help he knew it was chincho he runs over as quikly as he can and finds chincho and tanaka in a spider web once again *
tenchi: aw comeon guys! how am i suppose to be watching the gate if u too keep runing into trouble!?
chincho:hehe sorry master
tanaka:ZZzzzzzzzz...Zzzzz.....
tenchi: is he..?
chincho:yea..he sleeps when were in certain trouble xD
tenchi:*sigh* comeon you too
*as tenchi tries to get chincho and tanaka out he struggles and then a big giant spider jumps down from the trees behind him but tenchi doesnt hear it as the spider is as silent as a cat*
chincho: hey master can you gaet that right ther..BEHIND YOU!
tenchi:wha? *turns around*
*right as the spider swoops his sharp pointy leg at him he doges and the spider acidentaly cuts chincho and tanaka out*
tenchi: run to the gate! ill handle him!
chincho:are you sure?
tenchi:yea! hurry go!
chincho: ok!
*chincho grabs tanakas arm and falls because tanaka is still sleeping*
chincho:*sigh*
*chincho picks tanaka up and struggles because tanakas heavy*
chincho:gah! *runs/walks off*
*as tenchi looks back at the spider the spider strikes again but this time tenchi blocks it with his staff*
*as both tenchi and the spider struggles with pushing away the other ememy there weapons lock and now the only way IS to push off the other enemy as tenchi struggles he finally pushed off the other spider making him back waway 5 steps*
tenchi:*tries to breath* gah...ah....
*tenchi runs to the spider with all his might and hits with massive critical combos only a god can do tenchi hits the left of him the right of him and he hits the spiders face so hard the spider flys 3 feet back and tenchi finally lays the finishing move, he jumps in the air holds the bottom of his staff with 2 hands and smashes it into the middle part of the spider smitting the spider to the ground*
*tenchi gasps for air with his shirt turn only showing half of his chest with rock hard abs and with a grin on his face*
tenchi:hmph shows you right
*right when tenchi said that he felt a dark presence lurking behind the trees..the a dark figure comes out of the trees and the light shines on the figure it is ryoko.tenchi turns around and ryoko quikly goes back behind tree*
tenchi:hello? r...ryoko?
ryoko:he..hello tenchi..
tenchi:hi!
ryoko:what are you doing out here so far out in the forest?
tenchi:i should ask you the same thing..
ryoko:u first :3
tenchi:*laughs* do you not see the giant spider on the flor and me beaten up?
ryoko:*laughs* sorry :3 i mean why wer you fighting the monster?
tenchi:well i needed to save my guardians
*ryoko walks up to tenchi shyfully and puts her hand on his chest the puts the other hand on his shoulder and steps in her tipitoes*
tenchi:wh..what are you doing?
ryoko:shhhhhh
*nizume puts her finger on his lips then kises him she closes her eyes as does tenchi*
ryoko opens her eyes*
ryoko surprised h..im sorry...im very sory..i..hope i se you again! *she runs away embaresed*
tenchi:bu..wait!
*ryoko dissapears*
tenchi:*wispers and looks down* i hope i se you again too...oh! chincho and tanaka!

continued of chapter 1

*tenchi runs back to the holy gate as fast as he can knowing that its been 2 hours and the holy chain is now jsut a regular chain, tenchi arrives*
tenchi:huh? what happend?
*chincho and tanaka on flor eatingbeeries*
chincho:*fully mouth* hmmm? eysh mashter wantsh shome?
tenchi:r..u.drunk off of berries?
chincho:thesh are dullberriesh the juish maksh u drunksh
tenchi:what happed to tanaka?
chincho:hesh jusht shleeping ash he alwayash doesh
tenchi surprised kay..chincho u might wanna get some rest
chincho:ish..donsh.nee..a..resh.....*wobbles and falls asleep to the ground*
tenchi:ummm good night chincho...and tanaka
*tenchi leavs the unenchanted chain on the gate just to make sure something isnt gana break in..or if it does itl take take a litle time for it too*
tenchi:agh! its almost midgnight...maybe*yawns* i should get..som...sleep....
*tenchi sits on chair and leavs it back on the gate and puts his staff in his lap*
*all tenchi could dream that night is of ryoko he just wondered who she was..or were she came from.and why she keeps runing into him...and..the most important thing he wants to figure out is..if..ryoko likes him as well...all he mostly dream about is him and her kissing, he loved her the first moment he saw her..*
*tenchi falls asleep*

to be continued on chapter 2:the demons eyes

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copy and paste this to see what ryoko looks like

http://media.photobucket.com/image/ryoko%20tenchi%20muyo/Hei-Long/Tenchi%20Muyo/RyokoWallpaper120copy.jpg?o=8

do the same to this to see tenchi

http://media.photobucket.com/image/tenchi%20masaki/marie_antoinette07/japan%20anime/tenchi.jpg?o=2 . . .