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dark lil mind
pretty much wats on my mind
its your fault
Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my naked soul.
It mutilates me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the dead grass.
In a haze of shock I cry out, Why?!
while Hell takes me.
Now alone, my cry of mercy falls upon howling eyes.






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Ahh-RealSwagger
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 02:12am
Very, very good. I like the way you use your words.
This is really quite beautiful - do continue writing.


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 20, 2008 @ 01:33am
This is so good infact! this is aewsome! and sad in a way too. . .I love it ^^;



Silent Vampyre
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