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The thoughts and brain hiccups of Mai
A breif description is never a full description nya :3
The pain in what you do (working) lyrics by Ru-chan UPDATED
ok I've been working on this song for a long time
but it is not yet done
but if it sux im sry but believe my it sounds better with the beat and stuff
if you want me to sing it ask nya X3
(the beat and stuff sort of sounds like "running up that hill" By-Kate Bush)
well sort of -_-
alos yes I have posted this up before lolz ^^ but I have changed it


The Pain Of What You Do

*Intro*

*chorus*
There is a pain in my chest, I hope it was there for the best
There is a pain in my head, I wish I could just go to bed
There is a pain in my heart, I know it was there from the start with you
but now I don't know what else i can do
because all I feel is the pain in what you do....

There is a pain in my arm, I know you didn't mean to cause harm
There is a pain in my leg, I guess all you can do now is beg
There is a pain in my heart, I felt it there from the start with you
but now I don't know what else to do

*Chorus*

There is a pain in my hand, I guess it is time to stand
There is a pain in my foot, look at all the pain you've input
There is a pain in my heart, I felt it there from the start with you
but baby I don't know what else to do
Just sit around and hope you do like you do


That's all I really have so far
(well actually I do have more but it sux so I'm not posting it yet XP)
B.T.W this will be changing A LOT so i'll put UPDATED in the title ^^
plz comment criticism, compliment whatever X3


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User Comments: [4]
xX Celestial Moon Xx
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Sun Oct 19, 2008 @ 08:45pm


Omg I wanna hear this song! It sounds so good ^^

Mwahaha sing, you fool, SING!!!!!!!!


Color Crush Virus
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Sun Nov 02, 2008 @ 12:06am


It's a beautiful song, keep on working on it.

Wait, so which part exactly is the chorus and which is the intro?


M a i H a r u
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Sun Nov 02, 2008 @ 12:10am


o the intro I have yet to put in nya ^_^;

I just put that there so then people could see there is one....

I might just have it be instrumental nya


Color Crush Virus
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Sun Nov 02, 2008 @ 12:26am


Ah I see, well get it up soon. I want to here it!!


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