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Occarina Amulet's Diary...sort of
My stuffs that I can complain about. And sometimes stories or poems! :D :D ;D ;D
My New Story! Yay for me!!!
As I was about to walk through the front door,it opened and something...soft glomped me. "Nii-san! Welcome home!" Oh...great. Yu-chan. Yu-chan is my baby brother. His full name though is Yukishi Suwahara. "I was soooo bored without you hear Nii-san! But your back now;so can you play with me? Pleeease?" Waah! He's staring at me with those cute wide eyes! Damn,but I can't play now;NOT now. I'll just tell him no;very nic-- "C'mon Nii-san! You just got back from your buisness trip,and I haven't seen you in forever! Please?" Oh no! I think he might cry! His cerulean blue eyes gaze up at me with tears threatening to spill over. I just now notice that he was probably taking a shower,because his light light brown hair is slightly damp. 'hn. He could catch a cold like that.' " *sigh* Fine. Just let me get changed first;and dry your hair. You'll catch cold if you don't." "O-okay Nii-san! Thank you!" And with that he went over to the bathroom to grab a towel.

____Yu-chan's POV____
'Wow! Nii-san said yes! he never does play with me anymore.' I'm drying my hair right now,and thinking my Nii-san is so cool. In the kitchen I here the phone ring. "Hey,Nii-san! Can you get that?" From his room Nii-san tells me ok. _In the distance from here to the kitchen I can still here some parts of the conversation Nii-san is having. Did I mention we live in a mansion? "Yes? Hello,this is Renji Suwahara. Who is speaking,may I ask?" My brother said politely. "Hey,Ren-chan,babe. Have you considered my offer? It's--" And then he hung up. 'Ren-chan babe...? Who would be so imformal towards Nii-san? And that voice on the other end of the line didn't sound like somebody I know.' I ponder that as I dry my abnormally light hair. As I look in the mirror I think of how dull I am compared to Nii-san. His hair is a silvery-blue shade,his eyes a crimson-blood red,and his face looks like something a famous sculpter chisled into stone. He comes up to 6 foot and two inches. As for I,only up to a mere 5 foot three and a half inches. Which is very short for a high schooler. And i'm a boy so naturally I should be alot taller than this right now. 'Maybe I take after Mom?' I blow my banges out of my face,the weird call already forgotten at the prospect of getting to spend time with Nii-san. Unaware of the shocks and suprises that await me in the near future....
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Ok,so if anyone does read this can you please tell me your opinion on it? It was really spur of the moment so if the story doesn't make much sense now that's fine...for now! '/'; -_- heart






User Comments: [2]
BlueberryInuzuka
Community Member





Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 04:54am


I like it, and I think you should write more!!! Waaaay more!!! I want to know what's up!


Occarina Amulet
Community Member





Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 08:55pm


OK! I'm already on the third part of the first chapter,but i've been waaaay to lazy to type it up!


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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