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unholiness
blood:my newest poem,please comment
as I wash away the blood on my hands,
i wash away my sins,
the murder of those i knew,
it's time to start again,
i know my history,i knew my past,
my possibilities were vast,
i knew it would come to this,
this dark and foreboding bliss,
the kill,
the chill,the thrill,
of mastery of mind,
drove me to this,
into abyss of insanity,
i learned, used,i eventually abused
this
the horror,the beast,the abomination,
me
this murderer in the mirror
this pale shadow of the man that is me,
yet is not me
i was a happy child,the one all loved and knew,
now running like game from the hunter
a man on the run,nay,the wolf,
on the run from the cage

itaru watanabe
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  • User Comments: [2]
    my lady raven
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    Sat Nov 01, 2008 @ 10:20am


    ooh i lyk..truly well done friend..kind of dark and foreboding, with a twist of OMG I love it! lol


    strawbarrie
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    Sat Nov 29, 2008 @ 06:15am


    (Thank you for nicely commenting on my poem in the arenas. 3nodding )
    Your stuff is much better than mine.
    I like how you put yourself in a killer's shoes. The feelings and experiences seem to be lived out into your words. It is very good, it is amazing.


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