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My poems


xXxVampyGenxXx
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kingdom betrayal
The deathbed is prepared,
The flowers are layed,
The mourners sing,
A soul sleeps.

Torches alight,
Mark the path,
The tears that fall,
May touch your mind.

Sleep cold,
Sleep still,
Let the music fill,
The tomb of old.

The king lies,
The queen cries,
The prince smiles,
He shall feats of lives.





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Cristal_watera_dragon
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comment Commented on: Sun Nov 09, 2008 @ 03:47am
its unespected
but its great
u shuld extended it more
but its good
woo
is he a vampire king?
surprised


comment Commented on: Sun Nov 09, 2008 @ 03:36pm
Interesting...I would have added a bit more detail...like the events of the death/ Murder. Who or what killed and how. =3



Kayetayo
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Sasami526
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comment Commented on: Sun Nov 09, 2008 @ 07:59pm
The prince smiles?! So it was HIM that did it! surprised


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