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The morning sun rose, blowing away the darkness as if it was a feather. A hiker walked up the path, panting as he went. The man came across a clearing and sat down.
"Oh My GOD!!" cried the man as he saw a pile of bones near where he sat. The hiker whipped out his cell and tried to look for a signal. Then, out of the brush stumbled a plae girl.
"Vampiir...vampiir..." she whispered. Then the girl slumped to the ground. The hiker caustiosly approached the slump and set the girl against a stone outcropping. The hiker the again flipped out his cell and dialed 911. Paramedeics arrived to the scene ten minutes later, putting the unconsicious girl on a stretcher. One paramedic approached the pile of bines and studied them closely. She took out several plastic bags from her supplies and carefull inserted a bone into each bag. The paramedics and hiker started back down, back toward the village.
Night fell again in Estonia. Again a lone wolf emerged from the same clearing he had killed the man in. The wolf stood up straight and took the shape of a nakedman. The man bared his long fangs and started down the path toward the village. The man walked down the village's dusty road, looking through windows as he went. The man started a quick jog which then turned out to be a swift run. The man sped down the road, houses a blur as he went. The naked man finally came upon a hospital, one with lights on. The man entered the hospital and saw the receptionist gasp. The man leaped onto the counter and grabbed the woman's throat. The man showed his fangs and bit deep. The receptionist fainted and soon was pale as a ghost. The man licked the blood on his lips and started down the hall. The man came upon the hospital's uniform closet. He adorned the clothes of a doctor and went through a door. In the room, lay a girl, machines pumping liquids and blood into several parts on her arm. The man stood at the foot of her bed and read her chart.
"Patient found in clearing up the road of the village. Severe blood loss and trauma. Found with a hiker and a pile of bones. Aniaml attack
The man smiled, relishing in the human's ignorance of their world. The man stooped and removed the girl's blankets.....






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H0neyKyd
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 03:16am
wow
you made a lot of spelling mistakes
also i think the wolf should be named brandonlol
and gosh so much violence


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 10:33pm
Haha, nice story (:
And don't say "The man" so much.
You can say He you know, like
"He started with a quick jog..."
Vivid imagination man surprised
Keep it up...?



Womanizer Woman 007
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