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War-Torn Soldier's Poems
My journal contains some of the poems I write. I do like poetry, and wish to post some here. Please read it and tell me what you think. It would be much appreciated.
A Soldier's Report to God
This poem is called a Soldier's Report to God. Here it is:

The Soldier stood and faced his God, which must always come to pass
He hoped his shoes were shining, just as brightly as his brass

"Step forward now, you Soldier, how shall I deal with you?
Have you always turned the other cheek?To my Church have you been true?"

The Soldier squared his shoulders and said, "No Lord, I guess I ain't
Because those of us who carry guns, can't always be a saint.
I've had to work most Sundays, and at times my talk was tough,
And sometimes I've been violent, because the streets are awfully rough
But, I never took a penny, that wasn't mine to keep.
Though I worked a lot of overtime, when the bills just got steep,
And I never passed a cry for help, though at times I shook with fear,
And sometimes, God forgive me, I've wept unmanly tears.
I know I don't deserve a place, among the people here
They never wanted me around, except to calm their fears.
If you've a place for me here, Lord it needn't be so grand,
I never expected or had too much, but if you don't I'll understand."

There was silence all around the throne, where the Saints had often trod
As the Soldier waited quietly, for the judgment of his God.

"Step forward now you Soldier, you've borne your burdens well,
Walk peacefully on Heaven's streets; you've done your time in Hell."





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  • User Comments: [4]
    Porcelain Flower
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    Sat Dec 13, 2008 @ 06:00am


    Its so beautiful your very talented =D


    zleio
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    Wed Dec 17, 2008 @ 05:47pm


    well im not a poetry type of person but i really liked


    Milkey Girl
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    Thu Dec 18, 2008 @ 06:30am


    u have a talented writeing poems...


    alexihymia
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    Thu Oct 29, 2009 @ 01:39am


    beautiful (:




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