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ok these are some haikus i wrote so i want you peoples imput on them The Pain The blood and the pain. The rush and the pain, so happy. Down again, the pain. Dead Maybe when I’m dead, You’ll remember what you did To me in the past. Jump To jump or not to Thanks to you I decide, jump I jump and I die. Repeat My life will repeat Over and over again Until I just die. yeah so tell me wat u ppl think

Posted by: xXSpringxnichtXx Mon Dec 22, 2008 @ 03:07am

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Commented on: Sat Dec 27, 2008 @ 01:12am


	You know, you should post these in the Arenas if you want them to be read. ... ... .. . In my opinion, they're kinda... um.... emo. But that's YOUR style, so yeah, I can't complain.

Commented on: Wed Jun 10, 2009 @ 11:28am

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Commented on: Tue Sep 08, 2009 @ 05:26am


	.... Kinda morbid, don't ya think? But they're good. I can't write poetry worth a crap.... I did post one in the arena's though..... Nobody! So yeah. You should try writing more than just haiku.

Commented on: Sun Nov 01, 2009 @ 05:40am


	Depressing. I'm guessing that's what you were going for.

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