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*Back in the past of Zerostsu and Itachi rivalship*
As I was walking back home I saw my rival Itachi walking to the training court. Now would be a good time to get some action from this guy, so I went up to challenge Itachi. "Yo, Itachi let have a lil rematch between you and me for good time sake huh?" Itachi stare me down with such pride "You will be no match against me, remember the last time you challenge? You lost, plain and simple." Man this guy get me pissed off but I have to agree with him, he was powerful at that time. All I had to do was to smirk at and reply with " What the matter You aint chicken or anything are you? I thought You were the top student at our school? You cant be scared of little old me, now would you?"
Obviously I got Itachi pissed off now. " Watch your mouth boy, it seem to me that your ready t get your butt handed to me again."
"Oh ya that right how bout we go right?" Without a second thougth I imediately activated my sharingan, it seem Itach did the same. "LET GO BIG BOY!!!!!!!" I imediately launched a barrage of nonstop punch at him, but it seem he dodge every isngle last of them. That sharingan it truely an amazing talent of him, but out of nowhere he disappeared behind me and knocked me out with a single chop, now im falling to the floor so slowly as my sharingan diactivate. "Damn......you......Ita.....chi......" As I saw him walking up to me he lift me shirt colar and told with such a hateful voice "If you ever dream to ever beat me in match awaken your true rage and hatred toward me, only then can you get the same eye as I do." Then I see his sharingan take shape of a different shape of what to seem the legendary mangekyou sharingan, but that impossible the legend clearly stat that in order to awaken that eye something tragic must happen to that person. His eye change back to his normal eye and he drop me unconsionce to the floor. That was the week before he killed the entire clan *end of flashback, back to present day*
I still remember that dark voice, it keep repeating in my head "If you ever dream to ever beat me in match awaken your true rage and hatred toward me, only then can you get the same eye as I do."
Then I remember the only women that I ever admire the most dying in my arm by Itachi. I still cant believe she gone, her care free smile and her gentle body will alway be carved in my memories, heck I would say she be my first lover. I swear that one day I WILL KILL ITACHI UCHIHA!!!!! At that moment my sharingan activated against my own will and my rage fused with me eye then Itachi threat keep ringing in my head, then all of a sudden it stopped. I went to the nearest puddle of water to see my reflection, but what I saw was not the Zerostsu that evrybody knew and loved, no it was far worse. It was the Zerostsu that swear he will get his revenge, the Zerostsu who finaly aquired the same eye as Itachi, I finally awoken my darkest rage, the mangekyou sharingan. I try to deactivate but my eye wont obey me what to do,what to do? I cant face my friend then at that moment I remember all the good time I had with all my friend, then my sharingan deactivate. I must never tell Keaga about this like his rage, I must never allow anyone to see my eye again. It was dark now, I must get back home. I walked through the front door and all my friend who saw me was worried. They all came to me and ask me where I was the whole time. Keaga came up to me "Zerostsu where were you the whole time, we been looking for you this time. Never mind forget that let eat dinner now since your here" Everybody was at the table ready to eat dinner I reply with such discomfort "Sorry guy's, but im not hungry tonight, im going to bed now. Please dont come inside I want to be alone tonight." I look for Mia and told her to sleep With the Shunomaru and Yasu. I walk to my room, close the door behind me, took my shirt off and slept on my bed. The only thing I can think of, was how much of a a** I was just now. What to do now I wonder myself. I stare at the wall and ask to the haven "What would you do in a time like this, Youkina?" Then I fell asleep






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strawberri_dreamer
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 17, 2009 @ 10:00pm
needs more flow and you definately need to work your grammer. Otherwise decent. (i love constructive crtisism)


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