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Monochrome Battle Round 2

Scoring: Round 2
Fried Squash
Queeny’s Results: 73/100
FM’s Results: 62/100
Salad’s Results:
Mem’s Results: 80/100
Guest Judge Results (Sylwithia): 59/100
Temporary Replacement (Love Bites): 56/100
Score Average: 66/100
The Bagel
Queeny’s Results: 89/100
FM’s Results: 77/100
Salad’s Results:
Mem’s Results: 86/100
Guest Judge Results (Sylwithia): 91/100
Temporary Replacement (Love Bites): 71/100
Score Average: 82.8/100
Dr. Voxx
Queeny’s Results: 91/100
FM’s Results: 88/100
Salad’s Results:
Mem’s Results: 81/100
Guest Judge Results (Sylwithia): 90/100
Temporary Replacement (Love Bites): 82/100
Score Average: 86.4/100

In depth!

FM's Scoring
Bagel
Adherence to the rules- 5/5 (everyone gets 5 on this, nobody broke the rules)
Flow- 17/25
Texture- 18/25
Balance- 20/25
Overall Appeal- 17/20
Total Score- 77/100
I don't think the bright whites really flow with this avatar and the gimpi is throwing me off by a lot. But it is a good avi. Just which you didn't have those blind like whites.

Voxx
Adherence to the rules- 5/5 (everyone gets 5 on this, nobody broke the rules)
Flow- 20/25
Texture- 22/25
Balance- 23/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 88/100
This is a lot better than you previous entry. I have no suggestions. It was executed well.

Squishy
Adherence to the rules- 5/5 (everyone gets 5 on this, nobody broke the rules)
Flow- 14/25
Texture- 12/25
Balance- 14/25
Overall Appeal- 17/20
Total Score- 62/100
I like the complete darkness you have for the top of you avi, but the bottom killed me. I don not like it at all. The pants are just bleh. And it wasn't as put together at the top if you had it completely black you might have gotten a better score.

Queeny's Scoring
Bagel:
Adherence to the rules - 5/5
Flow- 20/25
Texture- 25/25
Balance- 19/25
Overall Appeal- 20/20
Total Score- 89/100
Comments: I was actually pretty impressed with this avatar, rarely do I see you wearing those shades, and I'm just, like I said really impressed with all of this, including the Gimpi you used on your head to signify the two colors.

Voxx:
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 25/25
Texture- 19/25
Balance- 25/25
Overall Appeal- 17/20
Total Score- 91/100
Comments: Now, this one I really like of yours, I'm glad to see that I like this entry hundreds of times better than your first one, not only is this impressive to me but it's just, easy on the eyes and the fact that I've never seen you do a backwards avatar, then you whip out this is just very impressive.

Squash:
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 16/25
Texture- 16/25
Balance- 19/25
Overall Appeal- 17/20
Total Score- 73/100
Comments: Murrr, not one of your best Squash, though it's still pretty impressive... This would've looked better sitting down than standing up, the feet sort of bother me... You were pretty strong in the last round but this just didn't say 'wow' to me.

Memz' Scoring

The Bagel
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 20/25
Texture- 20/25
Balance- 23/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 86/100
Comment: I loved this. I wish you could get some white on the belt area, like on it not around. But it is still good. Nicely done.

Voxx
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 20/25
Texture- 18/25
Balance- 20/25
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 81/100
Comment: Would have been nice to see some black on the legs, like using the gents cane instead of the grenade. It is nice, really like it.

Fried Squash.
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 20/25
Texture- 18/25
Balance- 18/25
Overall Appeal- 19/20
Total Score- 80/100
Comment: It looks great IF you half close your eyes and you really see it. But not many people look at it with there eyes half closed, I didn’t at first. It would be nice to see a little bit more texture on the avatar, the starter shoes that are black and white (can’t remember name) might have worked well. It is a nice theme. =)

LB's Scoring
Bagel ::
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 18/25
Texture- 18/25
Balance- 17/25
Overall Appeal- 13/20
Total Score- 71/100
Comments- Rather than the gimpi imp on your head, I would have preferred to see the arm warmers. The sugar plum sleeves, and whatever is super bright white under the skirt, should go. They stand out like a sore thumb.

Voxx ::
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 21/25
Texture- 19/25
Balance- 22/25
Overall Appeal- 15/20
Total Score- 82/100

Squash ::
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 15/25
Texture- 15/25
Balance- 16/25
Overall Appeal- 5/20
Total Score- 56/100
Comments- To me, this looks as if you were trying to make an "abstract blob" mono av, and stopped halfway through. The smoke from the carol cigar is very very distracting and really throws off your balance. The general bottom of the avatar is severely lacking.

Syl's Scoring
Bagel-
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 21/25 The bright white shorts really throw this off. D:
Texture- 24/25
Balance- 23/25 Bottoms a little light compared to the top
Overall Appeal- 18/20
Total Score- 91/100

Voxx-
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 23/25 Black baseball socks would have helped a bit, I think
Texture- 22/25 Lower half lacked compared to upper
Balance- 23/25 -points at flow comment- xD
Overall Appeal- 17/20
Total Score- 90/100

Squash-
Adherence to the rules- 5/5
Flow- 15/25
Texture- 12/25
Balance- 12/25
Overall Appeal- 15/20 I get what you are tryin' to do here, I really do, but I don't think it was executed well D:
Total Score- 59/100






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