Hey people. Today was the last day of aims testing. I also Have a softball game later today which I don't feel like going to. well thats it for today. Oh wait I want to compare two of my Haikus I did in writing class please tell me which one you thing is better.
1) The dog put on his hat and tie
Then grabbed his briefcase
and went to work
2) A frog sat upon a lillypad
Spotted a fly
And then bye bye fly
Please tell me which you think is better I have to choose one to present to the class.
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