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“Victory!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I yelled as I signed my contract. There is no fine print. Why, I wrote it myself. I have an anime contract! A battle royale between all of the animes I know! I have to tell Razu. "Razu, Razu" I said. I stumbled and fell from something cold, clammy, and hard. I stood up in horror as I saw her corpse on the ground. I checked her pulse. Nothing. Wait I hear a beat. Her heart stopped, but she is not dead. Her flesh was rotting like a zombie. When all the flesh peeled off, I saw a new pale body emerge. Two holes were in its neck. Her teeth were sharp and she screeched as sun shined on her eyes. "The light, it burns!!!!!!!!!!" She howled. burning_eyes I screamed and dashed out of the room towards the room of Kazume. She was standing as her skin peeled off like Razu's. Kazume really was a zombie. I ran across the hall being chased by a slowpoke zombie and a vampire blinded by the sun. I dashed in, in search of Jin Lee. He was hiding under the bed. “Have MERCY”, he exclaimed. “I’m my own flesh and blood. I don’t need my blood sucked or flesh eaten. If you take away my flesh I’ll only have “and blood”. Take the blood away and then all I have left in flesh and blood is the word and!” I slapped him for the corny joke. “Jin Lee” I cried, “Cool it. Lady Hanakimi and Mrs. Tomotaro have transformed into beasts. I need sutras, a cell phone, 900000 yen, and 2 gallons of juice.” “Why, Goya” he asked. “It’s because you owe me big time for helping you.” I replied.
I slammed the sutras upon the door. There is a place, I thought. But where is it? Then it hit me. Natasha’s shop, Skin Tyte, sold potions, but there were horrible side effects. You need a human potion to return them to normal. But, if not applied soon enough, the effects may become irreversible. The sutras keeping the girls out won't last much longer. I leaped out the window and jumped back in. “Come on Jin Lee, you Chicken” I said as I grabbed him and jumped out of the window again. He screamed in terror as I covered his mouth with heavy duty duct tape. “Shh. They can’t hear us” I said. I landed in my car. Jin lee landed head first on the concrete street as an 18-wheeler approached and a hive of bees, wasps, yellow jackets, and hornets fell on top of him and I’ll skip the bloodcurdling screams and gory details. I saw a bolt of lightning fall from the sky and strike him. For someone controls pillows and sleep, he never has a soft landing. I pulled out some chalk, traced his outline, had police tape put up, and dragged him into my car. I hoped that the girls would abandon the chase if they thought he was dead. It was a gamble, but I was begging it would work. We drove for 15 minutes in circles, back and forth, leaving a trail of Jin Lee’s pillows to throw them off track. The pillows lead to Bass’ken Lake. I hope they would run overboard by accident. We drove to Skin Tyte. Jin Lee woke up but still couldn’t speak for he had duct tape over his mouth. I ripped the tape off and he howled from the pain. Sissy, I thought as we walked in and saw Natasha.
“Morning boys” she said. Her grey hair and body piercings gleamed in the sun. “Natasha”, I began. “Hold it,” she said “I sold a vampire and zombie potion today. They haven’t been sold in years.” “To whom” I asked. “Razu’s ex-boyfriend got the vampire potion and that guy who sells lemonade has the zombie potion.” “I have a theory” I said. “Jin Lee, Razu and Kazume are your best friends right?” He nodded. “Doesn’t Kazume adore lemonade? “Yes she does.” He said. “What if they spiked her lemonade with the zombie potion?” “I don’t know. Where do we go next?” he asked. “Razu’s house,” I said, “Kose may help.” We drove to Razu’s house and saw her mom, Kose Hanakimi. “To what do I owe this honor?” She asked. “What do you know about Namae Lesos?” I offered. “He broke my daughter’s heart. I last saw him making up for it by kissing my Razu on the lips. I noticed his mouth was red like blood. It grew even redder though.” “That’s it!” I cried. “His mouth was red because of the blood he was drinking. Natasha said he bought a vampire potion. His mouth was red from blood and the red potion. When they kissed, he put the potion in her mouth. I’ll be back.” Jin Lee and I bolted out the door.
“Be careful Jin Lee” I said. “It’s dark out, a vampire’s own home turf.” I saw Razu fall from the sky. I looked her in the eyes and fell into a deep trance. A woke up from my illusion in a cave with Jin Lee, who was in a fright induced coma. Why didn’t she finish me off? I wondered, and then I knew. It was daybreak at last. Bats flew in the cave. One of them might be her, but which one? I pulled out a mirror and slid it out of the cave into the sunlight. The light reflected into the eyes of all the bats that were, well as blind as bats. One bat shriveled up and I ran out with Jin Lee since we knew the shriveled bat was Razu. “Where to, Goya?” he asked. “Nintaiga’s house” I replied. We arrived at the house at midnight the next day.
“Nintaiga-kun, where do you work?” I hoped he would give me a clue. “The trade service” he replied. “Why?” “Were there any trades with Razu or Kazume?” “As a matter of fact” he began, “Kazume received a full body cast. I heard she’s hurt.” “Kazume is,” I started to explain the situation when… the lights went out. Nintaiga screamed. I struck a match and saw her… or should I say them. Razu and Kazume were in the house with us.
I saw 3 ominous figures. The 3rd was Namae Lesos. I saw him kissing Razu and transforming into a vampire. Jin Lee cowered behind Nintaiga’s shoulder. Razu jumped towards Nintaiga and her hair touched his face. Nintaiga grabbed her hair and swung her around in circles with it. “Touch me and DIE!!!!!!!!” he said as he let go of her hair. Razu did not fly through the ceiling but bounce off of it and landed on the floor. Nintaiga grabbed her, set her up straight, and dropkicked her at an angle that made her flip into the wall. Jin Lee blasted pillows at Kazume’s feet and she fell onto the ground.
“Nintaiga-kun” I screamed, “That’s Razu, Kazume, and Namae. Go easy on them.” He shuddered. He stared in disbelief as he recognized them, too. Here I am I thought. Being a big leader and not even fighting for myself. I’m pretty much defenseless. Wait the rings from G-Corp. I pulled out my four rings. I activated Hot Foot which burned Razu’s feet. I activated Solar Rays which has sunlight come and attack on Namae. He screamed and I remembered. He’s a vampire I thought. Sunlight will kill him. I waited until his skin started to melt then I stopped. I used Coyote Spirit to speed myself up so I could quickly attack Kazume. Then I grabbed Jin Lee and almost Nintaiga until I remembered what he did to Razu. I told him to come on. The Coyote Spirit ring speeds you up. However, it has a side effect. Your feet can not stop moving until the effect subsides. So we could not stop running. “Jump in” I yelled to Jin Lee and Nintaiga. “It’s no longer safe here. We have to go get Kose.” So we were off and we didn’t have much time. We drove away and I used Coyote Spirit so the car wouldn’t stop moving. I looked and saw the Roof Shades for my car were gone. Those shades were big enough to protect from sunlight. Crap, I thought. I looked out the rear view mirror and shone my sunlight through it. I was full of rage because the shades were stolen. My light did more damage that way. The blast was like Kryptonite. It shot the vampires down. However, Kazume was a zombie and she was gaining fast. She’s a zombie but she was running faster than ever. We were driving near a steep cliff when I used Coyote Spirit to speed Kazume up. “What the hell are you doing?!?!?” screamed Jin Lee. “I have it under control” I said. We turned but Kazume was very fast. But the side effect is that she can’t stop. She couldn’t slow down and fell of the cliff. No wonder she needed the body cast, I thought.
We were still being tailed by the vampires this time with the protection of the Roof Shades. While we outran the vampires, we deduced that Kose was not safe. We picked her up from her house and drove to where we knew we were safe. Where Jin Lee works: the Marketplace. Jin Lee said hi to all the little people and his workers. “Hey Frank. How’s the wife? George, have you hit the gym? Thought so! Shiri, Lan, and Kyoko. How are my favorite triplets? Shiri, Kyoko, girls, have you lost weight? New haircut? Hey, either way I like it.” “Boss sir” said the girls. “We like you, but you aren’t being very smooth.” “I’ll pretend I didn’t hear that and give you all a raise. Lan my man. Shave and I’ll promote you. That beard is getting on my nerves.” Jin Lee was the head honcho, the big boss, the luxurious leader, and heir to the marketplace throne. Generations of Okiyas (that’s Jin Lee’s last name) have worked at the Marketplace. He went to a sealed metal door and typed in a password. “This, my friends, is the inventory, the storage room of the marketplace.” He pulled out weapons and gadgets. Jin Lee equipped himself with a stop sign shield and a crowbar. I grabbed a kunai knife and a shuriken (ninja star) and gave my little Langer dragon on my head a set of fake vampire teeth. The dragon that was nudging me received a flute, and the one around my leg obtained toothpaste mouth foam. Hey, fake rabies may come in handy. Kose donned a smoke bomb, and a gun. Nintaiga grabbed a sword and a Jackster Magic Wand. We drove away to Village Greens and we found it. The Null Chamber.

I recharged and upgraded my rings. “Is that all we need?”