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my life is hell
my life is miserable, why do i even give life a chance. I want to do a cheerful dance, but you see their is no hope for me. i should give up and weep in shame or i can make my grave. i want this life to end, so i can spend my life in darkened heart
a blackened heart
people
people judge me
they judge me for who i am
they just wont give a dam
if only they could see how there hurting me
ripping
stabbing
pulling apart my heart
pearcing my soul with there wicked darts
making fun of me because im smart
trying to kill my wicked heart
dont they see its not me
its them hurting me
at least i have a heart thats wicked and dark
cant they see having a dark and wicked heart is better than not having one,
if only they could see a dark heart cant break apart a soul and heart
because its already a ripped apart and tortured heart.






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Hylian Werewolf
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commentCommented on: Fri May 29, 2009 @ 09:56pm
Once again, a very emo-ish poem. YOUR POETRY ROCKS!! KEEP WRITING TALON-CHAN!!! mrgreen
Sadly, it seems nobody's said anything about my story.... crying


commentCommented on: Sun May 31, 2009 @ 04:15am
i loved ur poem it rocks!!!!!! biggrin idk how to comment hylians but can u do it for me plz thanx
good luck with ur life i hope it improves eachday so its not like hell wink



XxKinari the lost soulxX
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