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Nothing important and more!! Inside this dear book, er, well thing, is things I have wrote or things I haven't wrote that I like. So now, just lookie on inside and take a peek at the magnificent =D


Rozamoon
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A poem...Lookie!!!!
Break Me

Hate me for being me
look at me and scream
push me hard pull me back
try to crush my dream

tears flood from me like rain
drowning who I used to be
suffocating my inner self
who’s crying to be let free

don’t touch me I’m to fragile
to breath is to hurt
my pain is my endless life
pushed face down in the dirt

tattooed with the scars of hate
labeled like I’m fake
break me for what its worth
rob me of what you take

slap me down when I rise
call me for what I feel
laugh and leave me, walk away
sell my soul, the devils deal

whats left of me is broken
look at the scars and see
I didn’t do this to my self
but I did let you break me






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VaGiNaL FaRiE
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comment Commented on: Wed Jul 22, 2009 @ 05:01pm
i like it c: (needds lotsa commas!!! i love teh commas T~T)


comment Commented on: Wed Jul 22, 2009 @ 05:03pm
Yeah I know. It needs work but I'm lazy right now lol



Rozamoon
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Ivy the Demon Hunter
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 23, 2009 @ 10:16pm
It has good and clear details. I like it. It's good. Makes me feel sad and it's full of emotion. ^^ Good job!


comment Commented on: Thu Jul 23, 2009 @ 10:25pm
Thanks ^^



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