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In this journal I will put stories I made and put on the web and I will also do other things such as asking for your ideas on a new story topic.
Juan Sad Story, The final fight
Alright this last chapter is broken up into 3 parts. But that's because when I type these stories I like them a special way. So enjoy!!

With Juan and Shadow

It is now midnight and Juan is finally coming to. He looked around to see were he was. All he remembers was being with Shadow on a bridge. And that’s it. He didn’t know were he was and he was scared.

Were am I? Heck were is Shadow? He thought.

He then turned around in his cage to see Shadow on the wall, sleeping.

“Shadow!” Juan cried.

“Huh? Juan?” Said Shadow in a sleepy tone.

“Shadow were are we?”

“We are in Walter’s warehouse.”

“Why are we here? How did we get here? And are you alright?”

“Walter has some plan that deals with you, Walter and John brought us here, and yes. Why?”

“It’s just because your back was hurting.”

“And it still is. But wait why did you beat up John like that? I saw you do it and I liked to see him get hurt, but why did you do it so hard? I saw blood on his back.”

“What do you mean? I would never hurt anyone! Even if they kidnapped me!” Shouted Juan. He didn’t believe any bit of what just Shadow said.

“Well look at your hands.” Said Shadow as he tried to point to Juan’s hands.

Juan did but he couldn’t believe it. He saw blood on his hands. He couldn’t even see his fur color on his hands.

“No. NO! No way could I had of done this to someone!” Said Juan in disbelief.

“Yeah you did. I saw you do it right in front of my eyes.” Said Shadow. Juan looked into his eyes and he could tell. It was the truth.

“But how is that possible?! I would never hurt any living being!!!!”

“Hey calm down.”

“How can I knowing I hurt an innocent being?!” Said Juan with his voice getting darker again.

“Juan you should seriously calm down! If you don’t you might kill us all!!!!” Shouted Shadow.

“I CAN’T!!!! UGHH! WHATS GOING ON?!” Cried Juan with his voice changing from his to a darker one.

“Juan?! Are you ok?!”

Juan didn’t answer because the pain inside him was too much for him. But even though he couldn’t really hear much, he was able to hear Walter and John enter. He could also see that they brought something with them. What is that?!? He thought.

With Shawna

She has finally found the warehouse when everything was going on. She then saw the lights go on from the windows. And in the light, she saw a raccoon like figure go near warehouse. But the weird thing was it looked familiar.

Who was that? Oh well let’s go check out what’s going on. She thought. Then she ran into the building but she couldn’t get in. The door was locked. Oh great!!! Well there is still a way in. But before she could break down the door, something already did. She looked to her right to see the raccoon she saw before.

“Who are you?” She asked.

“I’m Brenden.” He said as he ran in.

“Brenden. Hey wait up!!” She said as she ran after him.

With the boys a few doors down

Here everyone is going crazy. Walter and John are keeping their distance from Juan (who is going crazy in his cage) and Shadow can only watching Juan. Soon he was starting to dent the bars.

“Oh my god! Sir we have to get out of here!!” Shouted John.

“No we can tame him. Besides, it’s time.” Said Walter as he saw Juan break out of his cage.

“JUAN!!!! CALM DOWN!!!!” Cried Shadow who knew that what ever was in front of him wasn’t the little wolf kid he first met.

“SHUT UP!!!!” Juan cried as he punched Shadow in the stomach.

“OW! WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!” Shouted Shadow almost breathlessly.

“JUST SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!” Cried Juan again. This time he punched Shadow and almost hit his head. But Juan missed him on porpoise. Shadow only looked at Juan in shock. One, he had never heard him curse before and two, Juan could had of killed him if he didn’t miss.

“NOW YOU TO!” Juan shouted as he looked at Walter and John. “WERE IS THE WAY OUT OF THIS HELL HOLE?!?!”

“I’m not telling you.” Said Walter in a clam voice like nothing was going on.

“OH YOU’D BETTER TELL ME OR ELSE!!!!” Cried Juan to John who was petrified.

“He won’t tell you either. You’re just wasting your breath.”

“FINE!!!! I’LL JUST FIND MY OWN WAY OUT!!!!”

Perfect. Thought Walter. He then threw a devise that landed on Juan’s back. Then he cried in pain as he got electrocuted.

“Oh I’m sorry Juan. You can’t leave just yet. You’ll have to first do us a favor.” Said Walter while smirking.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! FINE JUST TURN THIS DAMN THING OFF!!!!” Cried Juan.

With that plea, Walter turned off the devise. “Ok we want you to help us concur the world.” Walter told Juan.

“WHAT IF IT WAS THAT THEN NO ******** WAY!!!!”

“Oh but we aren’t asking. We are demanding!” Cried Walter as he showed Juan the remote to the devise.

Juan just stared at Walter and the remote. He knew if he wanted to be free, he has to do this.

“Fine.” He said in regret.

“Oh exhalent choice! Now come, we must go plan on how to do it!”

“Not so fast Walter!” Cried a voice.

“What the? Who’s there?!” He demanded.

“Like you don’t know.” Said a different voice.

“Shawna?!” He asked.

“And…” She said.

“BRENDEN!!!!” The two cried as the came out of their hiding spots.

“Brenden?! Who the ******** are you?!” Cried John finally.

“It doesn’t matter who I am now does it John?” Brenden said. John was confused that this guy knew who he was.

“Yeah. But to me it matters that we get Juan and Shadow back!!” Cried Shawna as she ran for Shadow.

“Don’t you touch him!” Cried Walter. He then went to kick Shawna in the back but something stopped him. He was grabbed by Brenden and he sent him to the other wall.

“Thanks.” Said Shawna as she tried to undo Shadow’s chains.

“Welcome.” Said Brenden as he went after John.

“Well Shadow are you ok?” She asked.

“Yeah I’m fine but do you know what’s wrong with Juan?” Shadow asked.

“I do but not now. There.” She said as she undid the chains.

While this was going on John and Brenden were going at it. There where punches and kicks as fast as the two could go. Brenden was also doing back flips and front flips to dodge and attack. Juan just watched all this go on. He didn’t know what to do and who he should fight for. He was just plain out confused. Then something went around his mouth.

“You’re coming with me.” Said Walter. He then started to drag him away.

“Juan!!” Cried Shadow who followed them.

“Shadow no!” Cried Shawna. But something caught her leg and she tripped. John had taken her down with a whip after hitting Brenden to a wall.

“You’re not going any were little lady!” He said.

“Hey let her go!” Cried Brenden once he got off the wall.

Shawna then tried to kick John to gain freedom but the whip prevented this. So Brenden jump kicked John in the face.

“Hey thanks again Brenden.”

“Not a problem. Now go get Juan and Shadow! I’ll go take care of this dumbbell over! I need a good work out.” Said Brenden as he ran after John.

“Fine.” She said as she ran in the direction Shadow just went. But a door came down and blocked her exit.

“No one is going anywhere.” Said John.

With Juan, Walter, and Shadow

“Juan?! Were are you?!?!” Cried Shadow as he ran down the hall were Juan and Walter just went.

Crap we are being followed! Oh thank god there’s the door! Thought Walter. So he threw Juan into that room and locked the door.

“WHY DID YOU DO TH-“ Cried Juan before he had a hand put on his mouth.

“Shhhhhhhhhhh! Don’t say anything!” Whispered Walter.

The two then heard foot steps come and go. They kept quite for a few more minutes and then Juan said, “Ok now answer me this you jack a**. WHY THE ******** DID YOU BRING ME HERE?!?!” Cried Juan as loud as he could. He hoped that someone could hear him and get him out of there.

“Keep your voice down!” Plead Walter.

“NO I WON’T!! NOT UNTILL YOU ANSWER MY QUESTION!!!!” Shouted Juan. He just wanted to get out of there.

“Fine! But let me show you instead of telling you.” Said Walter as he grabbed Juan and dragged him to a machine.

“What the ******** is this?!” Cried Juan as he was thrown down on a table and strapped down.

“This thing will give me all you strength you have! After I get all that, I will take over the world!!!!! But I think I will start by destroying this city, then the state, and so on.”

“WHAT?! UGH!! GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!” Cried Juan as he struggled to get out. But it was useless. The straps were made of metal and even with all his strength, it just wouldn’t break.

“It is useless Juan!!! There is no way you can get out of this!!!! I made sure of it!” Said Walter as he got on another table. “Let the transfer begin!” He cried as these things attached them self’s on Juan’s and Walter’s heads. Then there was beeping and lights going off everywhere. The next thing that every body noticed was a scream. This scream came from Juan as his strength was getting drained out of him.

With John, Shawna, and Brenden

Right now the Juan’s scream can be heard.

“JUAN!!!” Cried Brenden and Shawna as they ran to were the scream came from.

With Shadow

Shadow was close to the room were Juan and Walter were so the scream was a lot louder than were Shawna and Brenden were.

“JUAN!! I’M COMEING!” He shouted as he came to the door were the screaming was coming from. Shadow tried to open the door but (like I said before) it was locked. So he started banging on it.

“LET ME IN!!!! JUAN!!!!” He cried as he banged harder and harder on the door. But it did nothing.

Back with Juan and Walter

Juan was still screaming his head off. And about 50% of all his strength was left. He couldn’t feel anything anymore or hear much anymore! But then something happened. The machine stopped draining the energy. It then started to transfer the energy to Walter. He only laughed his crazy man laugh. And this was just about as loud as Juan’s screaming.

“JUAN!!!!” Cried Shadow from outside the door. He has had enough of this. He kicked the door a few times. And soon it broke down. Shadow then ran inside but he stopped to see the machine. He then turned his eyes to see Juan on a table.

“JUAN!!!!” He cried as he ran after Juan. “JUAN?! ARE YOU OK?!”

“Hey what are you doing here?!” Cried Walter who just noticed Shadow. “Get out of here!”

“What no way Walter! I won’t do anything you say!”

“Fine then. GET HIM!!!!”

As soon as Walter said that, a bunch of robots came out of no were and ran after Shadow. Shadow tried to run away but one of the robots got his legs. Then another robot grabbed his arms and stood him up.

“Hey let me go!!!” He cried. He then struggled to get free but it was no use.

“Its no use little brat! And the energy is almost mine!!!”

This was true. Walter had 90% of the energy. Just then Shawna and Brenden just came in.

“JUAN!! SHDAOW!!” Cried Shawna. She wanted to run after the two but she was stopped. The robots caught her and Brenden a prevented them to move.

“WHAT THE HELL?!” Cried Brenden when the robots grabbed him.

“THERE’S NO WAY TO STOP ME NOW!!!” Cried Walter. He had all of the energy now. And there was no stopping him.

“Wow. You look great master!” Said John as he entered. But to his surprise the robots grabbed him to.

“Hey let go! I work with you! Get them off my Walter!!” He cried.

“No John.”

“WHAT?!?! BUT I’VE BEEN WORKING FOR YOU FOR A LONG TIME!!! YOU HAVE TO LET ME GO!!!” He cried as struggled franticly.

“I have no need for you anymore. Now if you excuse me, I have something to do before I go.” Said Walter as he went over to Juan. Juan looked tired and weak after all his energy was drained. And yet he had a look in his eyes that said he didn’t want to go out without a fight.

“You’re coming with me.” He said. He then undid the straps and carried him away.

“HEY YOU LET H-“ Cried Shadow but one of the robots covered his mouth.

And the same thing happened to the rest of the gang (and John). So all they did was watch Walter take Juan away.

Oh great! How are we going to get out of here?! And how are we going to save Juan?! Though Shadow. He looked around and saw everyone (but John) with a look like hope was lost. He then looked at John who had a shocked looked on his face. Poor guy. That must of hurt.

Then John tried to move. And soon the robots let go of him! Everyone watched him in amazement. Next John walked over to Shadow and freed him. Then Shawna and Brenden.

“Hey thanks.” Said Shawna. But John didn’t say anything.

“Are yo-“ Asked Brenden but Shadow looked at him with a face that said “Don’t say anything” on it.

“John thank you for saving us. But now we need to go save Juan.” Said Shadow as he ran out.

John and the others followed him and said nothing.

End.

Ok I hope you likedthe first part!! Please tell me what you think of it later!





 
 
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