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Fallen Wings
A little blurb from my book.....It doesn't have a title yet...tell me what you think.....and if you have any ideas for a title please share ^.^ hope jou like it!


The sky was a dull wine color, with Gray clouds smeared across it. The wind swept up the dead autumn leaves and they danced around the sky like little native americans around a fire. In a Grey building surrounded by a tall metal barbed wire fence, two gaurds sat conversing.
They sat on chairs in the dull gray halls of the the building an the voices where in harsh whispers,but could still be heard echoing through the halls.
" He tried to escape again....for what? The 20th time now?" one said with a chuckle.
The other guard joined him, " No matter how many times he tries ,he's not getting out of here....We got this placed locked up tight!" He said smiling a cocky smile.
" Yup Locked up really tight no one has escaped this asylum since 1984....." the other agreed.
It was silent for quite sometime before the guard stood up and yawned.
" Well our shift is over ....we best be on our way...." He said with a toothy smile.
Both men began to walk down the hall and the shuffling of their feet can be heard from a distance.
Meanwhile in a dark cell sat a boy in between ages of sixteen and twenty.He had a slight grin on his face ,but it was hard to tell with out any light. His name was Jake, Jake harris. For months he has spent his time trying to escape from the hell hole,everyone else called the asylum.It was not a peaceful place at all,they lied to everyone who had family in there, everyone here was abused or sexually harrassed on a daily basis. Jake was wearing a straightjacket that restrained any movement of his upper body, he hated feeling helpless. Jake sat in the darkest corner of the room smiling to himself knowing that his day will come....his day of freedom.His black hair wet from his sweat hung in his face as he breathed deeply. He couldn't take it anymore he had to escape or he'll have to end this pain for good...Thoughts raced back and forth through his mind an he let out a piercing scream " I'll get out out this hell hole! Just you wait and see...." His voice held a tint of hell and insanity. " My day will come when I obtain freedom.......and When I do i'll comback and burn this f**king sh*t house down with all of you b*tches in it!" He threatned. He was losing it an he wouldn't get it back.He couldn't waste another day in here or he'll have to end the suffering with his own hands.........


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  • User Comments: [1]
    scruffy132
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    Tue Nov 03, 2009 @ 10:53pm


    kewl
    crazy dude wanting freedom and threatin. sound like my kinda guy xD
    you have to write more on here b/c now i want to know what happens.


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