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Hi, im like totally boared
I still got 17 minutes left of class so ill enter another story, if i dont finish it ill finish after school.... possibly
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The Final day
Chapter 1: Competition
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Today was the day! My 15th birthday, also the day of a national surfing competition! Me, my older brother, and 3 other people where competing with us. My mom was chearing us on and telling us good luck. I walked up to my brother.
"Hey, good luck"
He gave me a cold glare then walked away. I stood there confused for a minute till my best friend Annie got my attention.
"JASON!! Good luck!"
"Thanks" I gave har a friendly smile. "Hey do you know whats wrong with my brother?'
"Jelous! duh!" Annie replyed without thinking much.
"Jelous? How!?"
"Jason, everyone knows your gonna win. hes jelous of your talent!"
"Theres no guarentee I'll--" I was cut off my the announcer telling us to get on our boards. I ran towards the waves. This is what ive been waiting so long for! Time to show everyone what ive been working so hard on!
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TBC in chapter 2 smile
I know its pretty short.. but i forgot what they call that page that comes before chapter one.. so for now its staying chapter one smile Also im not sure if "Final day" really fits what the whole story is about so if u read alot of this story then plz tell me if u have any better ideas... or if u know what that page before chapter one is called.. just comment roght HERE V wink





 
 
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