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Hey guys. So I've been really into Saw lately and thought since I'm a really good writer I should try and make my own Saw script so here it is


My Saw Script
(Music)
Stacy: They all just kept telling me to think about other things. But life seemed to be heading down hill once we were all captured there was nothing left to do but just suffer and wait your turn to die. Let the game begin.

(A large basement is shown, the people are scattered around the room with a prison ball chained to their ankle)
(Jason is the first one to wake)
(Jason looks around the room and notices the others)
Jason: Hey! Wake up!
(Stacy, Ramon, Kelly, Kevin, wake up)
Ramon: Who are you all? Where am I?
(Stacy and Kelly stare around the room looking for anything)
Kevin: Ok, let’s all settle down let’s try to figure this out
Kelly: Settle down? Were trapped in a basement with prison balls chained to our ankles how are we supposed to settle down.
Ramon: Ok let’s get to know each other what are your names mines Ramon
Kelly: Kelly
Jason: Jason
Kevin: Kevin
Stacy: Stacy
(A crash is heard)
Jason: What was that?
(Everyone feels a buzz in their back pockets)
(They all pull out a tape recorder with a tape already inside)
Jason: A tape recorder?
Kevin: There are tapes in them.
Ramon: Lets all listen to ours not all at once, one at a time so we know what were dealing with. I’ll go first.
(Ramon pushes play but it’s a blur)
(Kevin pushes his and it’s a blur)
(Jason pushes his and it’s a blur)
(Kelly pushes hers and it’s a blur)
(Stacy pushes her and a voice is heard)
Jigsaw: Hello all of you. You might have noticed but you have a chain ball around your ankle. On the chain ball is a four digit number. The number is the code to unlocking someone else’s chain. Some numbers don’t work on any chains. Each of you also have tape recorders, when the time comes your tape recorder will play. The basement floor is full of trap doors. When weight is set on the door the trigger will set and you will find out what is beneath each trap door. At the bottom of one trap door is the way to your release, you have four hours to figure out what lies beneath the trap door. Welcome to hell.
(Everyone begins to breathe heavily)
Jason: Ok let’s start trying out these combinations. Mine is 456
(Everyone tries to unlock their chain)
(Ramon’s chain becomes unlocked)
(Ramon smiles and stands up)
Ramon: YES!
(Ramon takes a step forward and falls through a trap door)

Thats it so far tell me what you think