This is a remake of my "One HELL of a Butler:Sebastian Michaelis" poem. I Sebastian Michaelis l read my poem, and since I asked for constructive critisizm, I got it! xDD Sebby changed some things from my poem to make it better.ITS WAYYYY MUCH MORE BETTER than the first time I had it.....It's soo good, I think I should learn from them! emo -sigh-, well, atleast it shows on what I need to work on xd I'm just going to try my best on my next poem, which I believe will be on Ciel Phantomhive ^-^
Remake:
The butler
Hardest job with the manor;
Starts early, ends late.
He, the one who is secretly the demon that lurks within the night.
Silently walking through the shadows without an ounce of imperfection
Ah! Perfection!
That is the definition of him…..
The one and only, Butler of Phantomhive.
Elegant but an evil complexity
He is… angelically demonic.
A demon that possess the voice of an angel.
The voice so sweet....it is like a poison within your lungs
Hear his song, His lullaby.
Drown into his symphonic tune~
Heart stops.
Can't breathe.
Throats clogged,
You can’t say a word.
Your ears focus on that one, simple sound.
So blissful. Something worth yearning for.
To hold him, is what I want.
To touch him, is what I can only dream of.
So distant.....So far...
In the possession of only a single glorious master.
You watch him…You see him, in awe.
He accomplishes every job in a way no other can.
Shines the silverware, the tableware.
Prepares the food everyone would crave for.
He dashes across the manner,
So diligently, to his next assigned job.
As the sunlight shows his radiance, his true light.
A complexion so soft, eyes that plunge deep into your being.
Lips which curve into that trademark smirk, beckoning you, mockingly.
His deep, black hair that compliments his look.
The gentle touch of his gloved hands...Oh how I wish I could be in his grip!
The perfect butler.
Completely loyal to his master.
Obeys every command without a complaint.
Bound by contract, so evil and cruel.
Made by a wish and a sacrifice, it's all he needs.
He will live and die protecting his master, until the end.
Then this will be their departure.
He will feast, upon the master’s soul.
But until then….
He will perform his duties with the utter most perfection,
So graciously, and without a single mistake.
As the butler of Phantomhive, what would he do if he couldn't do such simple tasks?
He is simply, One HELL of a Butler
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This journal is going to mostly have my poems in here.I'm planning to come up with new stuff every now and then.But I only make poems when I feel like I need to.I hope you guys are interested in my poems, and I hope you like them.Give comments!^^
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