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ummmmmm ok this is my journal I will be workin on tellin u my roan stories
by the way if u don't know who he is look on photobucket for roan look for the hand drawn one then click on my name...... its rook_250
the departure, Episode 2
Roan and rika's childhood pasted swiftly and when the time came for Rika
to depart the town to discover her magical abillities Roan was asked to join her....
you know to protect her.........ya.... thats it.
ok so back to the story. Roan went with Rika to find the temple in which to
to get the staff of ages. By the way Roan was equipped with the rusty Iron sword and rika the wooden magic rod. Ok back to the story.......again. but to get to the temple the had to cross the old bridge that leads out of town... but halfway through Roan heard a ripping sound. Roan said"whats that Rika" "whats what" Rika said.....just then the rope holding the bridge up snapped. Roan and Rika would have plummeted to their doom but fate intervened. Roan awoke with a jolt of pain. "rika get off me" said roan. oww man It's a good thing I landed on you Roan" said rika. "what are you doing" said A voice from a bush. "who are you" Roan said. the figure stepped out of the bushes. "are you doing somthing perverted" asked the figure. It was a child about their age."hey I should brain you for that." shouted roan. "like you could" said the kid. "Grrrrrr" roan made a swing at him
the child side stepped him roans hand hit a tree knocking it down. "wow your strong, I'm Rob nice to meet you" said the kid. "nice to meet you Rob roan please don't beat his brains out roan" said rika"where is your town" asked rika. I don't have one said Rob "but If you are asking where I live I live next to that temple" said Rob. Roan glanced over the hill rob pointed and saw the huge temple."where
are we by the way" asked Rika. on my abandon island" said Rob. "how could we be on an island If we fell down wait oh man I'm so confused" asked roan.
"I don't know" replied Rob "Follow me I want to show you the temple" said Rob.
when they got to th temple Roan and Rika gazed in awww at the size of the temple then they saw that it was in the shape of a gaint sword. "can we go in" asked Roan.
"sure but legend has it that only the one with the strengh of Adin can weld destiny"
"okay then lets go"said Roan. "are you sure that you want to bring such a pretty girl with you"said rob. Rika blushed. "what pretty girl the only girl here is.......whoops" said roan.Rika beat him over the head with her staff. "owwwwww" said roan "sorry rika" said roan."well if you are all done lets go" said Rob. then they headed into the temple............






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Kliagirl_3
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 14, 2006 @ 10:22pm
Cool. I like the story. Only thing you need to work on is your style, but otherwise biggrin


commentCommented on: Fri Feb 17, 2006 @ 05:26pm
It is pretty goo but kinda hard to follow the dialouge



SaukaKumagae
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GreenPeridot
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 20, 2006 @ 04:53am
all the names start wih r's. YAY!


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 22, 2006 @ 01:41am
Awesomeness story!!! So far i'm writing songs in my journal sweatdrop but i will write my stories one day 3nodding



Fayne_Mercentine
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ShelbySpectacle
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 12, 2006 @ 05:51am
this one takes the cake lol! ^.^ i really enjoyed reading this one keep going lol they rock!


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