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"God, you're so f*cking full of yourself! If you had a clue what you were doing you'd have been able to save Kelly's baby, but you didn't! So don't you dare think you can act like you're still some f*cking gift to mankind when you're not!"

Okay so... Hmm... establish train of thought. he starts out very bluntly telling her that she is his problem, acting like she's perfect and treating the world like maggots who can do nothing for themselves. She thinks she can do no wrong. What about
AshleyandStuffShould he say Kelly's baby or Derick's? Which do you think he would think is more hard hitting? lol
AshleyandStuffanyway, the thing about the baby and how she's not a gift to mankind. she's just a two-timing, backstabbing slut who makes herself feel better by pointing out the flaws in everyone else around her. Trying to save the universe when she couldn't even save he
AshleyandStuffher* own mother
AthenianMoonHe shouldn't really be thinking. When you're that angry, you don't think. It all just comes out, its like word-vomit. He'd call it Kelly's baby, because he loves Kelly and identifies with her more than Derick.
AthenianMoonAnd that last thing about the mother = Perfect.
AshleyandStuffOkay, that's what I was asking. lol
AshleyandStuffAnd yay! I'm getting better xP
AshleyandStuffSo...should he go on? lol Or is that enough verbal abuse to make her freak out? I'm sorry I suck so much at this! OTL lol
AthenianMoonIts enough =) btw, a Ria post is up. Not finished, but up. lol
AshleyandStuffYay! lol
AthenianMoonBecca would shake her head a little, her jaw trembling a little, and she'd just whisper "Zack... where... where is this coming from...?"
AshleyandStuffOkay, tell me if this is too controlled. "Three years of letting you stomp all over everyone you've ever met. Well not anymore. Not to me."
AshleyandStuff"Get the hell out of here!"
AthenianMoon"Three years of letting you plow all over everyone you've ever met. Not anymore. Not to me. Now get... the hell... out!" Just a few little things lol She'd push herself to her feet and slowly wlak towards the door. Stop and look back at him. Get scared and turn away again. Leave, walk calmly down the hall, then duck into the bathroom, close the door, start to cry. She hasn't been afraid of anyone like that since her father was abusing her in his drugged rages. It was almost like a flashback